New Year Awakening
A 100-Word Flash Fiction33 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
Hey, "Y", it is certainly hard to tell a story in only 100 words, but you certainly pulled it off. What's not to like...Cute story, well written, and paired with topic appropriate art-work. Well done. I just entered one of the contests that was only 75 words. Really tough to write things with so few words! Bill
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hey, "Y", it is certainly hard to tell a story in only 100 words, but you certainly pulled it off. What's not to like...Cute story, well written, and paired with topic appropriate art-work. Well done. I just entered one of the contests that was only 75 words. Really tough to write things with so few words! Bill
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Bill, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I figured this was leading up to a "gotcha" clincher. The piece doesn't disappoint. He IS a jackass, and I'm glad she laughed in his face. Your
dialogue is excellent.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I figured this was leading up to a "gotcha" clincher. The piece doesn't disappoint. He IS a jackass, and I'm glad she laughed in his face. Your
dialogue is excellent.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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LOL!! :) Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Janice, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a wonderful short story.
Well told and the surprise ending is funny.
Well done and well told.
Thank you for sharing this one with us.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I think this is a wonderful short story.
Well told and the surprise ending is funny.
Well done and well told.
Thank you for sharing this one with us.
Sharon
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Starting the New Year off with a little packing never hurt anyone, yeah? LOL!! ;) Thanx for your review, Sharon, and glad you found a chuckle! ;) Take care! Yvette ;) ;)
