Lovebird
cinquain contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
I love these lovely creatures and their sweet songs. You've done them justice in this lovely entry for the cinquain contest. My only suggestion would be to change the color of your font to something with more contrast. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I love these lovely creatures and their sweet songs. You've done them justice in this lovely entry for the cinquain contest. My only suggestion would be to change the color of your font to something with more contrast. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Dear Minglement, Thank you for your review and suggestion.
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have followed all the requirements of a cinquain.
Your picture goes great with your cinquain. Well chosen.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I believe you have followed all the requirements of a cinquain.
Your picture goes great with your cinquain. Well chosen.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Dear RShipp, Thank you for your review, compliment, and good luck wishes.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful reflection that effectively conveys a vision of a gentle bird that obviously has caught your eye... your author notes help to understand the 'admiring' verse! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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A wonderful reflection that effectively conveys a vision of a gentle bird that obviously has caught your eye... your author notes help to understand the 'admiring' verse! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Dear Yvette, Thank you for your compliments and review. Thank you for your good luck wishes.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a short and sweet poem. The simple format is effective for the topic. The picture is lovely and sets it off nicely. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for your ongoing creative writing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This is a short and sweet poem. The simple format is effective for the topic. The picture is lovely and sets it off nicely. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for your ongoing creative writing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Dear Susan, Thank you for your review and compliments.
Comment from May 1
Aww, this is such a beautiful poem. I love the imagery you used. The poem is well written and fun to read. Also, I love the imagery you chose for this one. All in all, a wonderful poem to read.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Aww, this is such a beautiful poem. I love the imagery you used. The poem is well written and fun to read. Also, I love the imagery you chose for this one. All in all, a wonderful poem to read.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Dear May1, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt.
This verse describes the Lovebird in the picture very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt.
This verse describes the Lovebird in the picture very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your compliments and review, and good luck wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic.
-Effective imagery and
use of alliteration.
-The repetition of the
first line adds good
emphasis to your topic.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic.
-Effective imagery and
use of alliteration.
-The repetition of the
first line adds good
emphasis to your topic.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Dear Pam, Thank you for your compliments and review, and good luck wishes.
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You are quite welcome.
