Ocean Experience
Technology tries, but there's nothing like the real thing...14 total reviews
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 575 ocean contest. Your syllable count is correct. Well written. I enjoyed the moving picture. It goes well with the theme of susurration. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the 575 ocean contest. Your syllable count is correct. Well written. I enjoyed the moving picture. It goes well with the theme of susurration. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this morning!!
Comment from June Sargent
There is nothing as soothing as the rhythmic sound of waves rising and falling. Nature definitely has it right. Science can only imitate. Let's enjoy the susurration...
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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There is nothing as soothing as the rhythmic sound of waves rising and falling. Nature definitely has it right. Science can only imitate. Let's enjoy the susurration...
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this evening! ;o)
Comment from RShipp
I chose a wonderful picture to match with your rhythmic haiku poetry.
I am a bit of a vocabulary buff... so I loved your word choice: Susurration.
Best wishes in the Ocean Haiku poem contest.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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I chose a wonderful picture to match with your rhythmic haiku poetry.
I am a bit of a vocabulary buff... so I loved your word choice: Susurration.
Best wishes in the Ocean Haiku poem contest.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this evening! ;o)
Comment from Cybertron1986
Quite an educational and relaxing piece. I can almost hear the soothing sound of standing at the shore on a summer's day with the choice of words. It's the kind of piece that persuades me to go back. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Quite an educational and relaxing piece. I can almost hear the soothing sound of standing at the shore on a summer's day with the choice of words. It's the kind of piece that persuades me to go back. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this evening! ;o)
