Tales From The Sea
5-7-5 contest10 total reviews
Comment from May 1
I like this poem, nice way of wording it. Also, I like the image you chose for this poem. All in all, I think that this poem is well written and very enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I like this poem, nice way of wording it. Also, I like the image you chose for this poem. All in all, I think that this poem is well written and very enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the ocean. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the ocean. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in your ocean piece.
The oceans are--have always been--a topic of mystery, wonderment.
The artwork is the perfect accompaniment.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in your ocean piece.
The oceans are--have always been--a topic of mystery, wonderment.
The artwork is the perfect accompaniment.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ocean poem. The waves come from deep within the ocean where all the secrets of the ages are kept Safely until it is spilled on the shore for us to discover.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ocean poem. The waves come from deep within the ocean where all the secrets of the ages are kept Safely until it is spilled on the shore for us to discover.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt.
This short verse tells of waves revealing the depths of the ocean.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt.
This short verse tells of waves revealing the depths of the ocean.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
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Comment from June Sargent
Secrets indeed! Mermaids and sea monsters. Treasures and pirates. Oceanic tales galore! Great little piece for the contest. Accompanied by perfect artwork. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Secrets indeed! Mermaids and sea monsters. Treasures and pirates. Oceanic tales galore! Great little piece for the contest. Accompanied by perfect artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I really liked this one. All syllables present and correct, which is nice. Good denouement in the final line, although not necessary, it does add to the piece. It's a bit more thought-provoking than many of the others in the contest, too.
I hope this does well
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Hi there,
I really liked this one. All syllables present and correct, which is nice. Good denouement in the final line, although not necessary, it does add to the piece. It's a bit more thought-provoking than many of the others in the contest, too.
I hope this does well
GMG
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
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Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 575 ocean contest. Your syllable count is correct. I love your message about waves revealing secrets from their depths. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the 575 ocean contest. Your syllable count is correct. I love your message about waves revealing secrets from their depths. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ooooo... I like the feel of this one: it gives the ocean that 'fantastical' feel that some seem to have forgotten -- Sinbad rules! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Ooooo... I like the feel of this one: it gives the ocean that 'fantastical' feel that some seem to have forgotten -- Sinbad rules! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Tales From The Sea"
Is a 5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good morning and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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"Tales From The Sea"
Is a 5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good morning and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
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