Don't Be Boxed In
Dare your life to shine. (In 20 lines.)11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-line poem, Don't Be Boxed In, has the required lines and speaks to reader who wants to break out and be an individual. We all want that.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This twenty-line poem, Don't Be Boxed In, has the required lines and speaks to reader who wants to break out and be an individual. We all want that.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Anyone with imagination and drive wants that, but I fear there are so many who never question anything, never ask why? Never dream to fly.
Comment from RShipp
A great picture you have picked for the 'boxed in' feelings.
A great philosophy, especially at the start of a New Year, to begin to think for one's self... to think outside-of-the-box. TO try to see things as the really are instead of how you at told to see them.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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A great picture you have picked for the 'boxed in' feelings.
A great philosophy, especially at the start of a New Year, to begin to think for one's self... to think outside-of-the-box. TO try to see things as the really are instead of how you at told to see them.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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It's easier said than done, because it takes effort to be original and keep well-informed so we make our own minds up.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 20 line poem contest. You have told a great message about motivation. I enjoyed your flow and rhyming pattern. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the 20 line poem contest. You have told a great message about motivation. I enjoyed your flow and rhyming pattern. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Line Poem writing prompt.
This well written verse recommends living outside the box.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 20 Line Poem writing prompt.
This well written verse recommends living outside the box.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from May 1
Wow, this is such a wonderful poem with such a powerful message. I feel like we are often times too busy to think, let alone think outside the box and that is why I find this poem to be so inspirational.
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Wow, this is such a wonderful poem with such a powerful message. I feel like we are often times too busy to think, let alone think outside the box and that is why I find this poem to be so inspirational.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a wonderful philosophy, and would make a great New Year's resolution. The picture you chose fits perfectly with the idea of needing to think outside the box, as does your incorporating varying rhyme schemes, which demonstrates your thinking outside the box yourself. You've done a good job, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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This is a wonderful philosophy, and would make a great New Year's resolution. The picture you chose fits perfectly with the idea of needing to think outside the box, as does your incorporating varying rhyme schemes, which demonstrates your thinking outside the box yourself. You've done a good job, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
This block of apartments resembles a monochromatic Rubick cube and I could never sort those things out. My brain doesn't work like that. I can see what the content of your poem is aimed at though and it is an interesting suggestion.
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This block of apartments resembles a monochromatic Rubick cube and I could never sort those things out. My brain doesn't work like that. I can see what the content of your poem is aimed at though and it is an interesting suggestion.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
Comment from emmaysavage
this is a good poem. I especially like your use of interior and end-line rhyme. It would be good to have the word "truth" or "lies" (or both) in the title
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this is a good poem. I especially like your use of interior and end-line rhyme. It would be good to have the word "truth" or "lies" (or both) in the title
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
Comment from Bobby Jo
Do we live in a box, we wont explore our desires and dreams, we fall into a pattern and refuse to see outside that I believe we all have a purpose, but do we ever find it?
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Do we live in a box, we wont explore our desires and dreams, we fall into a pattern and refuse to see outside that I believe we all have a purpose, but do we ever find it?
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Thinking outside the box when you live inside one is a hard task, but genius does exist and we strive to make changes for the better, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Thinking outside the box when you live inside one is a hard task, but genius does exist and we strive to make changes for the better, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
