What Does the Wind Say?
ABC's as the wind says them.36 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Tina, Well, I've read many ABC poems, but never one as long a this.
A personification of the wind and I like the line 'Utterly Unseen, - when one thinks of the power the wind has, ever changing, yet unseen - this made me think. Some good use of descriptive wording, especially Xcitedly LOL! Very well done - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hello Tina, Well, I've read many ABC poems, but never one as long a this.
A personification of the wind and I like the line 'Utterly Unseen, - when one thinks of the power the wind has, ever changing, yet unseen - this made me think. Some good use of descriptive wording, especially Xcitedly LOL! Very well done - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks Dorothy! Your review and compliment is appreciated! It was one of the most fun poems to write.
Have a great day!
Tina
Comment from Patty Palmer
That was quite a big task! All those abc's and the poem made sense too! It's fun to take something different and make something out of it!
"Keep right on writing!"
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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That was quite a big task! All those abc's and the poem made sense too! It's fun to take something different and make something out of it!
"Keep right on writing!"
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you Patty for this cherry review! I will keep trying to write right:) It definitely was fun!
Comment from RShipp
A wonderful ABC poem. I enjoyed the read.
And then working in so many alliterative examples in each of your lines... nicely done. The 'X' line was well X-ecuted as well.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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A wonderful ABC poem. I enjoyed the read.
And then working in so many alliterative examples in each of your lines... nicely done. The 'X' line was well X-ecuted as well.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Ha! I like your X-ecuted pun! I'm glad you enjoyed the read, and I appreciate getting your input!
Tina
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great alphabet poem that takes the reader on a journey. I particularly enjoyed the ending about yearning for zen. Your picture of the birds goes perfectly with your words. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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This is a great alphabet poem that takes the reader on a journey. I particularly enjoyed the ending about yearning for zen. Your picture of the birds goes perfectly with your words. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Aw, thank you for reading and reviewing! Yes, I did imagine the journey of the wind as I was writing!
Have a great day!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your ABCdarian poem, Tina. I like how you used alliteration for each letter in the lines for each ( X doesn't count). Your words at a quick pace just like the wind breezing by. Your image choice is perfect, too. You should have entered this in a contest ( I believe there is one). Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love. Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed your ABCdarian poem, Tina. I like how you used alliteration for each letter in the lines for each ( X doesn't count). Your words at a quick pace just like the wind breezing by. Your image choice is perfect, too. You should have entered this in a contest ( I believe there is one). Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love. Jan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review and compliments! I'm just getting on here again, but might soon enter a contest. I'm just glad you like it!
Comment from Fonda Little
I liked the imagery you placed in this! Great job with alliteration! Keep up the good work! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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I liked the imagery you placed in this! Great job with alliteration! Keep up the good work! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the review! And thanks for the heartfelt blessing!
I appreciate your input!
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Thank you for the review! And thanks for the heartfelt blessing!
I appreciate your input!
Comment from lyenochka
Fun alphabet poem! And I know what you mean because it's been windy here and the wind is threatening to take out power. I especially liked how you kept each line alliterative to the letter of the alphabet.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Fun alphabet poem! And I know what you mean because it's been windy here and the wind is threatening to take out power. I especially liked how you kept each line alliterative to the letter of the alphabet.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review. I admit it was fun to write! I hope you don't lose power!
Tina
Comment from Sueswrite
What a fantastic imagination put into words! That's what it's all about! I am inspired by your creativity with your chosen words connecting this one subject... Wind. I wish you great success. Sue
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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What a fantastic imagination put into words! That's what it's all about! I am inspired by your creativity with your chosen words connecting this one subject... Wind. I wish you great success. Sue
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Oh, so happy you liked my poem! I don't do enough imagining so this was fun. Thanks for using a 6 on me!
Blessings,
Tina:)
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You are very welcome. Sue
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well, this is an Acrostic on steroids.
Very well done. You've run though the alphabet describing the many aspects of wind.
I think you can be forgiven for the liberties taken with the X line.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Well, this is an Acrostic on steroids.
Very well done. You've run though the alphabet describing the many aspects of wind.
I think you can be forgiven for the liberties taken with the X line.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Yes, Sharon, I guess I am enamored of the wind...just a bit! Thank you for the compliment
and review!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a great piece of work. I feel like it is something I could do, but I would never come up with all those interesting words you came up with for each letter. Brilliantly done, fun to read, and a great image to complement your work.
Terry C.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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This is a great piece of work. I feel like it is something I could do, but I would never come up with all those interesting words you came up with for each letter. Brilliantly done, fun to read, and a great image to complement your work.
Terry C.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Terry,
Pick something you are passionate about...and the words will come! Thank you for the review...and message me if you try an ABC poem!
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Will do!
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