What Does the Wind Say?
ABC's as the wind says them.36 total reviews
Comment from lauralumummu
This is fun and has a great flow. The wind can't be seen but the effects are marvelous and sometimes devastating. Well done, Happy New Year, Laura-------
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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This is fun and has a great flow. The wind can't be seen but the effects are marvelous and sometimes devastating. Well done, Happy New Year, Laura-------
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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You are correct...a nice breeze is more enjoyable than fierce wind in winter! Thank you for the review!
Hugs, Tina
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Very clever abc poem from the POV of the wind.
you build your poem up to a great finale.
Waltzing and Watching
'Xcitedly, just to please
Your yearning for
Zen. Well done.
cheers.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Very clever abc poem from the POV of the wind.
you build your poem up to a great finale.
Waltzing and Watching
'Xcitedly, just to please
Your yearning for
Zen. Well done.
cheers.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Pearl, for the nice review! I appreciate it!
Tina
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an enjoyable and imaginative read, to cavort in step with the breeze, immersed in my read of the wind having "too much fun," in its lyrical and breathless free verse narrative...
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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In my opinion, an enjoyable and imaginative read, to cavort in step with the breeze, immersed in my read of the wind having "too much fun," in its lyrical and breathless free verse narrative...
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Glad you liked it. So fun to write it:)
Tina
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You're very welcome, Tina, I did...Eve
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! What a lovely ABC Acrostic, Tina! ;) You've taken all the different aspects of the wind (and more!!) and tied them together with human emotions ... quite a bit of emotion as well because the reader feels as though they need to sigh and sit back when they reach 'Zen' - Perfect!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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LOL!! What a lovely ABC Acrostic, Tina! ;) You've taken all the different aspects of the wind (and more!!) and tied them together with human emotions ... quite a bit of emotion as well because the reader feels as though they need to sigh and sit back when they reach 'Zen' - Perfect!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Haha...guess I went a little overboard, but the wind was so busy...in my head! Thanks for reviewing!
Have a great evening and day tomorrow!
💗Tina
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Haha...guess I went a little overboard, but the wind was so busy...in my head! Thanks for reviewing!
Have a great evening and day tomorrow!
💗Tina
Comment from Malerie
Nicely done form the "A" to the "Z." This poem was so much fun to read, your words were witty and had a nice flow. This made me see the wind as something having too much fun. Great read.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Nicely done form the "A" to the "Z." This poem was so much fun to read, your words were witty and had a nice flow. This made me see the wind as something having too much fun. Great read.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Great minds...yes I do think the wind has too much fun sometimes, showing off. Thanks for your take on it:)
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the wind and using your challenging A through Z form. Your "Nomad" simile is very effective as is your reinforcing artwork selection. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the wind and using your challenging A through Z form. Your "Nomad" simile is very effective as is your reinforcing artwork selection. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thanks Joan for the thorough review! :):)
Tina
Comment from jusylee72
Beautifully created and blowing in the wind with all your wonderful descriptions of a wind, breeze or gale. I enjoyed your take on this one. lovely.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Beautifully created and blowing in the wind with all your wonderful descriptions of a wind, breeze or gale. I enjoyed your take on this one. lovely.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the complimentary review! Its always nice to hear someone likes your simple words:)
Tina
Comment from Hitcher
Great use of alliteration and an impressive alphabetical poem. You give the wind all of its dues with your creative selection of words, one can soar, float and drive their way through the visuals you have offered up.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Great use of alliteration and an impressive alphabetical poem. You give the wind all of its dues with your creative selection of words, one can soar, float and drive their way through the visuals you have offered up.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I am glad you took the "ride" with the wind! Thank you for a great review. Now I am soaring:)
Have a great day!
Tina
Comment from susand3022
Hi Tina! Your wildly windy words in alphabetic order were a wonder to behold! That was more of an ABC poem than I've seen before, having more A's on the A-line, B's on the B-line, etc... Well done and lots of fun! :)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Hi Tina! Your wildly windy words in alphabetic order were a wonder to behold! That was more of an ABC poem than I've seen before, having more A's on the A-line, B's on the B-line, etc... Well done and lots of fun! :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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I just did it to the extreme. The poem grew larger as I contemplated the wind's personality and actions! Thank you for the review...fun is good!
Tina
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the A - Z moods of the wind and what each wind whispers or shouts mean. It will take fear away when we concentrate on the characteristics of each wind sound.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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A very well-written poem about the A - Z moods of the wind and what each wind whispers or shouts mean. It will take fear away when we concentrate on the characteristics of each wind sound.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the review:) It was fun! We are supposed to have high winds today...Thanks for the reminder to listen to what tgecwind might be saying:)
Tina
