What Does the Wind Say?
ABC's as the wind says them.36 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Poet ! I gave you your 2nd vote.
I found your poem full of verve ... exciting and ... wild.
I love the idea of the wind fooling around like a mischievous child...at first, I didn't notice that you had gone through the whole alphabet ...( smile )
There is so much to take in ..I read it three times ..
it's original, fresh and creative..Love it.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Ciao Poet ! I gave you your 2nd vote.
I found your poem full of verve ... exciting and ... wild.
I love the idea of the wind fooling around like a mischievous child...at first, I didn't notice that you had gone through the whole alphabet ...( smile )
There is so much to take in ..I read it three times ..
it's original, fresh and creative..Love it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much! I admit it was fun to write!
Tina
Comment from Alchera
Wow! Beautifully penned throughout its vertical rushing free versification structure and its winding natural windy narrative storylined content.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Wow! Beautifully penned throughout its vertical rushing free versification structure and its winding natural windy narrative storylined content.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I like your review because it copies the path of the wind! Windy, like winding!Thank you taking time to review!
Tina
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I like your review because it copies the path of the wind! Windy, like winding!Thank you taking time to review!
Tina
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WElcome!
Comment from Sugarray77
This is an excellent write and so imaginative. I loved the different words you chose to describe the playfulness of the wind. Really well done, Tina!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This is an excellent write and so imaginative. I loved the different words you chose to describe the playfulness of the wind. Really well done, Tina!!
Melissa
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you Melissa! Yes, playful! I like that!
Thanks for stopping by, and for the compliments!
Tina
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Thank you Melissa! Yes, playful! I like that!
Thanks for stopping by, and for the compliments!
Tina
Comment from bob cullen
This quite simply is brilliant. I love things that are different and innovative, especially when they are as good as this. It displays great talent along with imagination. Loved it.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This quite simply is brilliant. I love things that are different and innovative, especially when they are as good as this. It displays great talent along with imagination. Loved it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you so so much! It was fun to figure out. I've never had my work called brilliant before, so I thank you! Thanks for the encouragement!
Comment from rjuselius
This is like right out of an automatic machine gun dear tina! It moves as rapidly.i love the format and the alliteration! Have you made yö the format? It is rather brilliant!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This is like right out of an automatic machine gun dear tina! It moves as rapidly.i love the format and the alliteration! Have you made yö the format? It is rather brilliant!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I'm not sure what you mean about the format...I'm not good with advanced editor yet, lol. Thanks for your apt description of machine gun firing. I did feel the poem reads fast!
Thank you for reading and the larger than life 6! Hugs back to you too!!
Tina
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Perfect. I would point out my favorite part, but I love the whole thing and smart choosing cleo for the visual! Overall effect is quite stunning! Liberty with x line-call it poetic license! Great job. Extremely creative and this is one that would hook a reader right into it!
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Perfect. I would point out my favorite part, but I love the whole thing and smart choosing cleo for the visual! Overall effect is quite stunning! Liberty with x line-call it poetic license! Great job. Extremely creative and this is one that would hook a reader right into it!
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you ma'am, haha! I love Cleo photos. I use them often! You bowled me over with such great review! Its so cool to be noticed for something I love to do!
You are just precious!
Tina
Comment from diamondbogle
This was very well done. I enjoyed the format that you chose. I liked how breezy your lines felt, a bit like the wind themselves. I did not see any mistakes or anything amiss. Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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This was very well done. I enjoyed the format that you chose. I liked how breezy your lines felt, a bit like the wind themselves. I did not see any mistakes or anything amiss. Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your taking the time to review my poem!
Tina
Comment from Susan Larson
I felt like a gentle breeze was carrying me through your acrostic poem. What beautiful words and what a beautiful picture! Your ending, "Waltzing and Watching 'Xcitedly, just to please Your yearning for Zen." inspired me to breathe in and give you a six!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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I felt like a gentle breeze was carrying me through your acrostic poem. What beautiful words and what a beautiful picture! Your ending, "Waltzing and Watching 'Xcitedly, just to please Your yearning for Zen." inspired me to breathe in and give you a six!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Oh, yay! You got carried away by the wind. This review really does inspire me to choose words that will resonate to the reader.
Thank you!
Tina
Comment from Louise Michelle
What an innovative poem! You certainly let your imagination sore and took this reader along for a very entertaining ride. This was so much fun to read and I really was wondering what 'z' word you would end it with - perfect. I think this deserves a shiny star. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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What an innovative poem! You certainly let your imagination sore and took this reader along for a very entertaining ride. This was so much fun to read and I really was wondering what 'z' word you would end it with - perfect. I think this deserves a shiny star. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Oh, Lou, thank you! It really was fun to do!
Glad you like it!
Blessings,
Tina:):)
Comment from Carl DeVere
I recognize the Blue Ribbon in this one. It is a joyful, playful flight of imagination the ends in the indication of a serious spiritual search--Zen. Lots of alliteration add spice to this piece. I can well imagine myself having this experience. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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I recognize the Blue Ribbon in this one. It is a joyful, playful flight of imagination the ends in the indication of a serious spiritual search--Zen. Lots of alliteration add spice to this piece. I can well imagine myself having this experience. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I love to hear a poems effect on a reader!
Tina
