Punchinello
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Punchinello Chapter 3"Terror strikes the Texas town of Astatula. Can She
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
Always a crowd pleaser: "He took a bite of the creamy fudge." Guffaw is one of my favorite words: "Her robust guffaw" Another way I identify with Cody, he sees a shiny object and attends to nothing else: "Cody devoured a cheeseburger. Fascinated with the Brown Pelicans feeding along the bay, the boy drizzled mustard and ketchup down the front of his new, white, souvenir shirt."
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Always a crowd pleaser: "He took a bite of the creamy fudge." Guffaw is one of my favorite words: "Her robust guffaw" Another way I identify with Cody, he sees a shiny object and attends to nothing else: "Cody devoured a cheeseburger. Fascinated with the Brown Pelicans feeding along the bay, the boy drizzled mustard and ketchup down the front of his new, white, souvenir shirt."
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
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My pleasure
Comment from Sankey
This was a good chapter. I know I did read this recently and skipped reviewing for time's sake but here you go. Gradually getting caught up, I still dunno why I missed these.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This was a good chapter. I know I did read this recently and skipped reviewing for time's sake but here you go. Gradually getting caught up, I still dunno why I missed these.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Appreciate you taking the time to review this chapter.
Comment from Elljae
The story continues, getting more interesting with each read. Its smart, concise, very entertaining and sharp. I look forward to reading each new chapter as soon as I finish the one I've read.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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The story continues, getting more interesting with each read. Its smart, concise, very entertaining and sharp. I look forward to reading each new chapter as soon as I finish the one I've read.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks. Much appreciated.
Comment from Ricky1024
Another fine chapter with the new and main character listening in.
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He seemed so patient but he knows his purpose is to cause mass destruction and sheriff Daniels will be his first if not last victim?
Maybe our other star Cody will come to the rescue or will Cody become the victim?
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Thanks and as usual, entertaining.
Ricky
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Another fine chapter with the new and main character listening in.
(Punchinello)
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He seemed so patient but he knows his purpose is to cause mass destruction and sheriff Daniels will be his first if not last victim?
Maybe our other star Cody will come to the rescue or will Cody become the victim?
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Thanks and as usual, entertaining.
Ricky
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good heavens... this sounds like a story right out of the world of 'Deliverance'! And Beth sure does ask a lot of questions for the wife of a Sheriff...lol! ;) Can't wait to see how Punchinello fits in with this nightmare of a family... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Good heavens... this sounds like a story right out of the world of 'Deliverance'! And Beth sure does ask a lot of questions for the wife of a Sheriff...lol! ;) Can't wait to see how Punchinello fits in with this nightmare of a family... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Your insights are so spot on. Appreciate those observations. Beth is not the sheriff's wife. She is his fiancé, and the one who brought Cody to Astatula. (All that comes out later in the upcoming chapters).
Comment from Ulla
This is a great new chapter to the book and it's getting more chilly with every single word. I really don't know what to think anymore. I can't wait to be reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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This is a great new chapter to the book and it's getting more chilly with every single word. I really don't know what to think anymore. I can't wait to be reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Carl DeVere
Good handling of many details and a surprise twist and turn of the story along the way. I could taste the creamy fudge especially and feel the macadamia getting stuck. The line about knowing the mystery and bottling it was very creative.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Good handling of many details and a surprise twist and turn of the story along the way. I could taste the creamy fudge especially and feel the macadamia getting stuck. The line about knowing the mystery and bottling it was very creative.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from royowen
While discussing the morals or lack there of a cannibal murderer called Simmons in interview with a lady called Beth, and Punchinello, describing the background of this nasty piece of work, it serene he had a dysfunctional father and mother, doesn't this nearly always seem the case..well done Brett, good scribing, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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While discussing the morals or lack there of a cannibal murderer called Simmons in interview with a lady called Beth, and Punchinello, describing the background of this nasty piece of work, it serene he had a dysfunctional father and mother, doesn't this nearly always seem the case..well done Brett, good scribing, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your insights and the review.
