Crisis Central
I called the number on the screen.39 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent. Sounds like those readings people seek out on the phone. The idea is to keep them on the line so the $ add up. Very good writing. I like instantly cured--I guess those phone calls DO work. LOL! Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Excellent. Sounds like those readings people seek out on the phone. The idea is to keep them on the line so the $ add up. Very good writing. I like instantly cured--I guess those phone calls DO work. LOL! Marilyn
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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The devil is in the fine print. I love to poke fun at my own human weaknesses. Cookies, quick fixes, (calling a number for a beauty product offered) and not paying attention to cost, does it to me all the time. I'm glad you enjoyed my satire.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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LOL! I agree. Usually on an impulse, if something looks good, we're on the phone ordering it. I've done it, too.
Comment from Barbaraj1
This was a funny story. Somehow, I didn't expect that kind of ending.
It was a good twist. Even the counselor's name has humor to it.
We all know about cookie consumption.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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This was a funny story. Somehow, I didn't expect that kind of ending.
It was a good twist. Even the counselor's name has humor to it.
We all know about cookie consumption.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and post-Christmas cookie honesty. I love to poke fun at my own weakness. It starts the new year off right.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sally xo
Comment from lyenochka
Gasp! $6,000? I can't imagine someone spending that kind of money on a phone call counselor. A real one would be better and then one would definitely avoid the ones called Beelzebub! Great job and wish you success in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Gasp! $6,000? I can't imagine someone spending that kind of money on a phone call counselor. A real one would be better and then one would definitely avoid the ones called Beelzebub! Great job and wish you success in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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The devil is in the details, and He is always expensive. I'm glad you enjoyed my satire and contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year, Helen dear.
Sally xo
Comment from Sankey
Yep, Sis, Well done. No spags. I hope a few more learn about all the names of the Devil. Angel of Light, Prince of Darkness, Arch Deceiver and many more. The pic was a give away as well. Love you.
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Yep, Sis, Well done. No spags. I hope a few more learn about all the names of the Devil. Angel of Light, Prince of Darkness, Arch Deceiver and many more. The pic was a give away as well. Love you.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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No Spags? Wow! A good way to start the new year. LOL! Thanks so much for the outstanding marks for this satire and contest entry. I love to poke fun at myself. Sending you and Louise my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
PS~ Sending this with my morning prayers for protection from the flames and for healing, strength and peace. Psalm 91 for you both today.
"He who dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty. I will say of the LORD, "He is my refuge and my fortress, my God, in whom I trust." Surely he will save you from the fowler's snare and from the deadly pestilence." Amen!
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Psalm 91 was a favourite of my dear MUm for years. Lord Bless.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork
for your story, Sally.
-A good topic and
the story is written well.
-The hook is very good
as the person decides
she better call the Crisis Center.
-She hears the comforting
voice of Beelzebub, and her
anxiety lessens.
-Great twist at the end.
-I think I would go back
to the cookies, though=
they're cheaper!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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-Great artwork
for your story, Sally.
-A good topic and
the story is written well.
-The hook is very good
as the person decides
she better call the Crisis Center.
-She hears the comforting
voice of Beelzebub, and her
anxiety lessens.
-Great twist at the end.
-I think I would go back
to the cookies, though=
they're cheaper!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the play-by-play review, my FanStory flower. I always enjoy reading them, dear Pam. You are a breath of fresh air, blowing upon me from the sea of reviewers. Recently, some very new and sadly lacking in your skilled art of reviewing have appeared, I'm afraid. I'm running out of mute space and it's only Janiary! I appreciate you more than ever! I will be nominating you once again and into perpetuity.
Stay close to me, dear Pam.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new,
Sally xoxo
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I really appreciate your reply, Sally,
and I like my new nickname, too! I am sorry to hear about some reviews have been upsetting. My best is sent back to you, too!
Comment from WalkerMan
Ha! Yes, the shock of learning the cost per minute after the fact would cure many "conditions" suffered by callers; and "Bub" knows no one will call that number again to dispute the charge. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Ha! Yes, the shock of learning the cost per minute after the fact would cure many "conditions" suffered by callers; and "Bub" knows no one will call that number again to dispute the charge. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments, Mike. Yours are always the encouraging words I need to hear. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)
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You are welcome, Sal. You always write something I like to read. :))
-- Mike
Comment from royowen
Just love your entry in this 75 word flash fiction writing contest Sally. Oh yes indeed, I think a $6000 bill for your consultation With Beelzebub, would certainly go a long way to curing your tempting little habit. An excellent entry Sally, very hilarious and clever, well done, good luck my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Just love your entry in this 75 word flash fiction writing contest Sally. Oh yes indeed, I think a $6000 bill for your consultation With Beelzebub, would certainly go a long way to curing your tempting little habit. An excellent entry Sally, very hilarious and clever, well done, good luck my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Thank you, dear Roy, for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
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Always a pleasure Sally
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest.
Your story is well told and has a surprise ending.
Well done and I wish you luck in the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest.
Your story is well told and has a surprise ending.
Well done and I wish you luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Dear Sharon, I appreciate the excellent review and kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my larkish entry for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from djeckert
hah, too funny. Unfortunately that 100 bucks a minute is pretty cheap when dealing wÃth Beelzebub. Lol. A good lesson in thére, for sure. blessings
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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hah, too funny. Unfortunately that 100 bucks a minute is pretty cheap when dealing wÃth Beelzebub. Lol. A good lesson in thére, for sure. blessings
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Isn't this just so silly? I always like to start the year with a bit of fun. Sending you my best today as always with many thanks for the review,
Sally :))
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Sally. Bub will give people everything they want so he can take everything they have. That's a really unique story with a funny punchline. Good luck in that contest. Z
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Hey Sally. Bub will give people everything they want so he can take everything they have. That's a really unique story with a funny punchline. Good luck in that contest. Z
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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I thought of you dear Z, when I wrote this. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Kinda like the devil to give and take away don't you think?
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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Hi Sal. You're so right about that. Z
