Letters from Heaven's Gateway 2
Reginald and Eleanor31 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
"It would cost him dearly, this penned gift of love. A loss of a leg, most of his right hand, and scars would mar his handsome face. He would survive the battle, but lose his will to go on." I was NOT PREPARED for this!
"Most of the men were in love with her before she left for the day" I liked this line!
"The bride was dressed in love and so was the groom." But THIS LINE is far better!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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"It would cost him dearly, this penned gift of love. A loss of a leg, most of his right hand, and scars would mar his handsome face. He would survive the battle, but lose his will to go on." I was NOT PREPARED for this!
"Most of the men were in love with her before she left for the day" I liked this line!
"The bride was dressed in love and so was the groom." But THIS LINE is far better!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your always kind reviews and encouragement. I will make sure I have fanned you to keep you close to me. I am blind and this helps me in my reviewing as well. Have a wonderful week.
Sal xo
Comment from rwilliam
WOW... I am sooo moved by this! Well done!
You did an amazing job of transporting back in time. I felt like a fly on the wall watching this incredible love story. Man, they knew how to express their emotions. I love it.
I felt tears welling up in me and had to pause as I read. You are a great writer and I so enjoyed this! Loved the song to! Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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WOW... I am sooo moved by this! Well done!
You did an amazing job of transporting back in time. I felt like a fly on the wall watching this incredible love story. Man, they knew how to express their emotions. I love it.
I felt tears welling up in me and had to pause as I read. You are a great writer and I so enjoyed this! Loved the song to! Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for superb rating and shower of stars, dear one. I appreciate your kind words and compliments. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. God is love and He teaches us to be unrelenting in our pursuits of others. I am spreading the love story by story.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year. So great to see you!!
Sally xoxo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You had my tears and my heart in this one. Perfectly done, I see no problems to note. I missed the first as my eyesight keeps me from reading prose but this one begged to be read
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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You had my tears and my heart in this one. Perfectly done, I see no problems to note. I missed the first as my eyesight keeps me from reading prose but this one begged to be read
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you, dear Barb. I appreciate your lovely review and kind compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from damommy
If only he hadn't been so adamant about sending the letter just then, things would have been different. At least, she found him before it was too late, and now has his child.
-If I make it back to England [intact]
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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If only he hadn't been so adamant about sending the letter just then, things would have been different. At least, she found him before it was too late, and now has his child.
-If I make it back to England [intact]
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated and encouraging. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Eleanor certainly tried hard to find Reginald. Muffins conquer all! Also, down-to-earth honesty.
She called to the nurse. "Do you have a hospital Chaplin?"
I think you mean Chaplain
Here is a good line. The bride was dressed in love and so was the groom.
Nice share.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Eleanor certainly tried hard to find Reginald. Muffins conquer all! Also, down-to-earth honesty.
She called to the nurse. "Do you have a hospital Chaplin?"
I think you mean Chaplain
Here is a good line. The bride was dressed in love and so was the groom.
Nice share.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the helpful critique. I am a Charlie Chaplin fan and use his quotes often in my writing. It looks like an auto-override here. LOL! I appreciate the kind review and stars, dear Crystal.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sally xo
Comment from Ben Colder
Bravo! Good one Sal. I never watched the video but I can imagine the rest. As a solder I can relate to some of this and know the importance of mail call. Thanks and good wishes.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Bravo! Good one Sal. I never watched the video but I can imagine the rest. As a solder I can relate to some of this and know the importance of mail call. Thanks and good wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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I'm afraid I am very behind with my review and to my dear friend, Ben Colder! Thank you so much. I appreciate the wonderful review and pleased you enjoyed my historically based love letter.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from Sugarray77
So very good Sally. I really liked this heart wrenching story of true love and perseverance. The dialogue was superb and the details were believable and real. So well done!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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So very good Sally. I really liked this heart wrenching story of true love and perseverance. The dialogue was superb and the details were believable and real. So well done!!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for the kind review and compliments, dear Melissa. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from darkrollingsea
Well done. The emotion was raw and palpable. The reader could feel the love between the two. It read smoothly and had good flow to it. Well done piece.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Well done. The emotion was raw and palpable. The reader could feel the love between the two. It read smoothly and had good flow to it. Well done piece.
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Thank you, dear darkrollingsea. I'm so glad you could stop by for a review. I appreciate the excellent score and kind comments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
Comment from fm wright
What a beautifully told love story, so tragic yet wonderful at the end, though i was rooting for it to be different. You revealed so much about them with your words Very interesting poster.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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What a beautifully told love story, so tragic yet wonderful at the end, though i was rooting for it to be different. You revealed so much about them with your words Very interesting poster.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Dear Faye, thank you so much. It's good to see my love letter fans again. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'm a history nit, especially the world wars. This recruitment poster was a rare find and I just felt imspired to write a story around it. Letters were are still so important to the morale of our soldiers.
Thank you also for the honoring six stars and kind compliments. It is so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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You are most welcome, as it was my pleasure. My best back to you.
Faye xoxo
Comment from robyn corum
Sally,
Okay... I understand now. I thought you were gonna make this a little longer and so I was really surprised when Gerry died at the end. A bit sad, too. After all that - his dedication to his love and to his country - that he had to die was sad.
But this piece was nicely written and easy to follow. It told a wonderful love story. The kind that was meant to last.
Some notes:
1.) There was one overworked clerk, stationed behind a tall mahogany
--> no comma
2.) There were at least a three hundred soldiers with the last name of
--> delete the 'a'
3.) "I'm not for certain, but I think he may be my fianc�??�?�©.
--> edit out Eddie's symbols
4.) "Please, my fianc�??�?�©'s dying and we wish to marry before he
--> ditto
Thank you! I enjoyed--
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Sally,
Okay... I understand now. I thought you were gonna make this a little longer and so I was really surprised when Gerry died at the end. A bit sad, too. After all that - his dedication to his love and to his country - that he had to die was sad.
But this piece was nicely written and easy to follow. It told a wonderful love story. The kind that was meant to last.
Some notes:
1.) There was one overworked clerk, stationed behind a tall mahogany
--> no comma
2.) There were at least a three hundred soldiers with the last name of
--> delete the 'a'
3.) "I'm not for certain, but I think he may be my fianc�??�?�©.
--> edit out Eddie's symbols
4.) "Please, my fianc�??�?�©'s dying and we wish to marry before he
--> ditto
Thank you! I enjoyed--
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and helpful critique. Yes, I tried to use spell check while in basic editor. It doesn't like French words. It didn't display until I posted. Drat. Evil Eddie strikes again. I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, it is sad as love is sometimes shorter than we would have liked. I have a good friend who lost her husband early on. :(
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
