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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent
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What a story, true or not you had me totally enthralled and never expecting the end like that. Pete was so conveniencing about all being okay, Nicely told

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Why thanks Barbara I've actually never had a nightmare about a roller coaster but I saw seen on final destination about it.
    That's partially where I got the idea.
    the roller coaster I do believe got taken down cuz it was quite old ask for the nestea iced tea plunge I would think that still there I always remember that and they take your picture and of course they want money as you're hitting the water at the bottom of the slide!
    Ricky
Comment from Gert sherwood
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello Ricky 1024
What an amazing and terrifying ride of what happened to "Rolling Thunder," one of the oldest wooden coasters in the United States.

Ricky take a look at the date
Happy New Year?"
Written on December 30th, 2029

Gert


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thanks for the typo error I think I'm always a little bit ahead of myself but 10 years?
    anywho I had a chance to really edit it I cleaned it up found a couple of places also and then added about 15 words.
    Ricky
reply by Gert sherwood on 30-Dec-2019
    You are welcome Ricky
    Gert
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019