My Imaginary Friend
faithful To the End5 total reviews
Comment from Dancemom
This is a cute entry for the surprise me contest. I like the twist that Nolie wrote her a note apologizing for leaving. This was well written and intriguing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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This is a cute entry for the surprise me contest. I like the twist that Nolie wrote her a note apologizing for leaving. This was well written and intriguing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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thanks so much. I appreciate your reading it and your comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun offering of childhood's end and maturity all along the way -- great job for the contest!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing that happiness and peak into the heart of a child this evening! ;) Good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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What a fun offering of childhood's end and maturity all along the way -- great job for the contest!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing that happiness and peak into the heart of a child this evening! ;) Good luck! ;)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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thanks, Yvette! for your comments and good wishes. Guess the ending didn't fool you, but I'd kinda hoped people would think it was the mother.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about an imaginary friend that will guide and teach you things no one wants to talk about. We all have that special friend in our lives at one point.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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A very well-written flash fiction about an imaginary friend that will guide and teach you things no one wants to talk about. We all have that special friend in our lives at one point.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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thank you, Sandra for reading and for your comment.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I really enjoyed reading it. You followed the parameters, but i don't think the ending was completely unexpected.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I really enjoyed reading it. You followed the parameters, but i don't think the ending was completely unexpected.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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oh well, didn't fool you, huh? Glad you enjoyed reading it, anyway.
I thought maybe readers might think it was the mother.
Comment from RShipp
I enjoyed the read about the imaginary friend. It was unique because of the 'friend' often not being the same 'person'. I don't think I have ever read any other imaginary friend story where this was true.
Best of luck in the surprise flash fiction contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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I enjoyed the read about the imaginary friend. It was unique because of the 'friend' often not being the same 'person'. I don't think I have ever read any other imaginary friend story where this was true.
Best of luck in the surprise flash fiction contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you. Guess you weren't surprised, huh? That's okay. I thought maybe readers might possibly think it was the mother.
Anyway, thanks again, and welcome to Fan Story!
