St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "St. Louis Chapter 20 part 1"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This novel continues realistically the human point of view, often view of others gets polluted with wrong and assumed faith, though when murder is the issue, still love at heart dismantles everything and keeps one on the right track; well said, well done; visit my profile; thanks for sharing this, wishing you and everyone close to you a happy and healthy New Year 2020!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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This novel continues realistically the human point of view, often view of others gets polluted with wrong and assumed faith, though when murder is the issue, still love at heart dismantles everything and keeps one on the right track; well said, well done; visit my profile; thanks for sharing this, wishing you and everyone close to you a happy and healthy New Year 2020!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I will certainly visit you. I am on Winter Break. I usually am extremely busy. I teach first grade and am normally only on FS on weekends. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Things are starting to fall in place. Parks seems interesting. These two are something else. It is for sure something is about to happen. Bring it on. Good one Barb. Happy New Year.
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Things are starting to fall in place. Parks seems interesting. These two are something else. It is for sure something is about to happen. Bring it on. Good one Barb. Happy New Year.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
You definitely know how to us readers interested in your story of an upcoming romance between McKenzie and Logan.
Now should I get more suspicious of Mitch? and one more thing I'm wondering why does Lucy need be watched and be safe, and why to make sure Jose has somebody to be with her?
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Hello Barb,
You definitely know how to us readers interested in your story of an upcoming romance between McKenzie and Logan.
Now should I get more suspicious of Mitch? and one more thing I'm wondering why does Lucy need be watched and be safe, and why to make sure Jose has somebody to be with her?
Gert
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Parks is a very dangerous man as we will soon discover. Thank you for the kind review.
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Barb you are welcome.
Happy New Year
Gert
Comment from judiverse
I can imagine is getting tired of the security. She and Logan have begun to suspect everybody, and Mac suspects her place is bugged. She's checking that out. Logan even questions Mitch, whom Mac trusts. But it's strange that Sidney shows up at Jose's place while Mac and Logan are there. It can't be just a coincidence. It looks like they want to question Joshua, because he knew the deceased Donny. It definitely sounds as if the police aren't doing their job. Even they're incompetent or a cover-up is going on. Excellent work! judi
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I can imagine is getting tired of the security. She and Logan have begun to suspect everybody, and Mac suspects her place is bugged. She's checking that out. Logan even questions Mitch, whom Mac trusts. But it's strange that Sidney shows up at Jose's place while Mac and Logan are there. It can't be just a coincidence. It looks like they want to question Joshua, because he knew the deceased Donny. It definitely sounds as if the police aren't doing their job. Even they're incompetent or a cover-up is going on. Excellent work! judi
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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I vote for a cover-up. How about you? Thank you for the kind review.
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Yes, definitely a cover-up. It seems like things keep happening to Mac, even though she has police protection. Someone seems to have inside knowledge. You're very welcome. judi
Comment from RShipp
Closer to becoming a couple? I think that horse has already left the barn....
I enjoyed another episode of your story.
"listening device finder" is a bud detector. FYI.
Looking forward to your next episode.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Closer to becoming a couple? I think that horse has already left the barn....
I enjoyed another episode of your story.
"listening device finder" is a bud detector. FYI.
Looking forward to your next episode.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you. I've made the change. I always appreciate help.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a wonderful continuation to your story. So McKenzie gave Logan a kiss and then what? The story continued as if it had never happened. Hmm! We will surely see more of that. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hi Barbara, this is a wonderful continuation to your story. So McKenzie gave Logan a kiss and then what? The story continued as if it had never happened. Hmm! We will surely see more of that. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Logan will add to it, later. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Excellent! Glad you and Ulla are back. Just need Tony Fawcus my fellow Aussie's French Letter story to work on. I was on to the bugging thing before I read it. Great minds think alike! Spags and suggestions. had to (have)been planned in advance."
OR had to be[en] planned in advance."
Maybe American grammar is different here?
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Excellent! Glad you and Ulla are back. Just need Tony Fawcus my fellow Aussie's French Letter story to work on. I was on to the bugging thing before I read it. Great minds think alike! Spags and suggestions. had to (have)been planned in advance."
OR had to be[en] planned in advance."
Maybe American grammar is different here?
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, we mess up the language.
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Being a teacher you would be more aware of language mess ups. I saw an American word being used in our news here other day. "Dove" as in "dived" been used to program instead of programme here for years. Please pray our main Internet seems to be down maybe sue to fires around the place.
Comment from Janilou
I didn't mind the chapter length. Plenty going on to keep it interesting! I enjoyed the interactions between the characters. I appreciate the character list at the bottom in the author's notes - that does help.
No errors noted. An interesting story!
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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I didn't mind the chapter length. Plenty going on to keep it interesting! I enjoyed the interactions between the characters. I appreciate the character list at the bottom in the author's notes - that does help.
No errors noted. An interesting story!
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. You paint a vivid picture for your reader with your words. You also add touches to put your reader right at the center. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. You paint a vivid picture for your reader with your words. You also add touches to put your reader right at the center. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from royowen
A first class episode Barbara, I love the interplay between friends of Logan and Mackenzie and Friends Jose and Lucy, the kiss shows how much Mac and Logan are in love, Sydney Parks drops by and Mac smells a rat concerning the bugging of her place, and his sudden turn up. Well done Barbara, love this, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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A first class episode Barbara, I love the interplay between friends of Logan and Mackenzie and Friends Jose and Lucy, the kiss shows how much Mac and Logan are in love, Sydney Parks drops by and Mac smells a rat concerning the bugging of her place, and his sudden turn up. Well done Barbara, love this, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
