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Literal Irony

Poets criticized for using long words.

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Comment from BeasPeas
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This is excellent, Laura. It falls into the category of "less is more." So even way back when--there were poetic critics. Some things never seem to change. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020
    Thanks Marilyn! I appreciate your comments and review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poem contest.
This short verse tells of poets and their critics.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks Sharon, Happy New Year!
Comment from humpwhistle
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I think it usually comes down to context and precision.
Doesn't matter the length of a word if it doesn't express the desired meaning. Just as it doesn't matter the age of the poet.
We're all only as valuable as the words we choose.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks for reviewing, Happy New Year.
Comment from Raul1
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I like how you structured this poem. It makes sense in a message you've written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks Raul, Happy New Year!
reply by Raul1 on 04-Jan-2020
    You're welcome. Happy New Year! :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Literal Irony, has the right set up and finds that the written chastisement for using long words contained longer words. Funny...........................

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks Bill, Happy New Year.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Very clever and informative poem! If you hadn't provided the explanation, I would have certainly looked up that word. I'm not sure who was more sesquipedalian: the young poets, or their critics; but I think it might have worked either way. Can a person be sesquipedalian, or only a word? Now my keyboard predictor knows it, too.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much for you thoughtful comments, Happy New Year.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 01-Jan-2020
    You're welcome. Thank you and Happy New Year, Laura!
Comment from Ricky1024
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This is a "5-7-5 Contest Entry."
Although short I could not find any grammar issues and it flowed well.
The Adjective content was wonderful as well as that Objective.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks a bunch dear Ricky.
reply by Ricky1024 on 01-Jan-2020
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a very good and a very informative 5-7-5 poem. I also love the script you used for your font, it seems to fit the time period. The quote by Robert Southey Is a great one, and adds quite a bit to the poem. We all know that usually less is more, and we all also know that we sometimes forget that when writing. Great poem. Good contest entry.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you Therese! Your comments and review mean so much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about using and sometimes misuse of long words can be very annoying when the reader has to look up each word to understand the meaning of the poet's poetry.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thanks Sandra, Your comments and review are appreciate.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL! Amazing how things (words, gestures) start off in one respect and then take on a whole different meaning as time moves forward....? :) :) This is an awesome 5-7-5 that not only makes complete sense (and even fun of - lol!) but also teaches a new word to many! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    Hello Yvette, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas, Thanks for reviewing. I really do appreciate your thoughtful comments.