Punchinello
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
Always a crowd-pleaser: "Placing a cup of hot java in front of the sheriff" A little psycho: "placed a finger over his mouth in a shhh motion so as to not give his presence in the house away." A little narcissistic: "What about me, I don't get one?" You have told us a lot about him without saying a word. Good job
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Always a crowd-pleaser: "Placing a cup of hot java in front of the sheriff" A little psycho: "placed a finger over his mouth in a shhh motion so as to not give his presence in the house away." A little narcissistic: "What about me, I don't get one?" You have told us a lot about him without saying a word. Good job
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
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***Grin***
Comment from Sankey
I really don't know how I missed these early chapters. I will try hard to go through these and review and get caught up. Fortunately, my Funny money is full up atm. One possible spag.Marked (")Astatula Assassin(")
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I really don't know how I missed these early chapters. I will try hard to go through these and review and get caught up. Fortunately, my Funny money is full up atm. One possible spag.Marked (")Astatula Assassin(")
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Don't know why you have not received them. There are six other chapters so far. Glad you enjoyed this one though.
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I am working through them won't do reviews on all of them ok.
Comment from Elljae
(scrote) This is a new word for me, thanks. I looked it up in the dictionary: another word for scrotum; slang, derogatory.
I really like writers who make me go to the dictionary, and I have to constantly go there with this piece of art. The story is scary because the deranged killer is in the midst of his hunter; the story is headed to a decisive point; it seems to be very smart. I only hope it continues to be. Don't let us down, Mr. Writer, Please.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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(scrote) This is a new word for me, thanks. I looked it up in the dictionary: another word for scrotum; slang, derogatory.
I really like writers who make me go to the dictionary, and I have to constantly go there with this piece of art. The story is scary because the deranged killer is in the midst of his hunter; the story is headed to a decisive point; it seems to be very smart. I only hope it continues to be. Don't let us down, Mr. Writer, Please.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Appreciate the review and your going back through all chapters to catch up on the story.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bret, I enjoyed this new chapter and to see that this lunatic is getting closer to his target. It's quite frightening actually. I'm looking forward to the new instalment. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Hi Bret, I enjoyed this new chapter and to see that this lunatic is getting closer to his target. It's quite frightening actually. I'm looking forward to the new instalment. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your review. Much more to come, so stay tuned.
Comment from Ricky1024
I read quite a few of your Cody pieces.
Is the assassin who was originally Cody's the range father now being called Punchinello?
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I like how you are holding a conversation between the sheriff and Beth's while Punchinello was listening in.
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Is nasty silent replies and remarks show that you have a good singer on this story especially when it comes to the serial killer.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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I read quite a few of your Cody pieces.
Is the assassin who was originally Cody's the range father now being called Punchinello?
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I like how you are holding a conversation between the sheriff and Beth's while Punchinello was listening in.
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Is nasty silent replies and remarks show that you have a good singer on this story especially when it comes to the serial killer.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Your first question I can not answer, would take the suspense out of whether or not he is. Felt the book needed a punch and am writing one in. Plan to self-publish the book by the end of 2020.
Comment from AGNA
First of all I really like your style, it's rare and I totally love how you carefully think every description. It must have taken time to think all that!!
All in all I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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First of all I really like your style, it's rare and I totally love how you carefully think every description. It must have taken time to think all that!!
All in all I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Review received.
Comment from RShipp
"Punchinello , the assassin" is just as horrid in this episode as the previous.
I liked how he was able to eavesdrop on the conversations being had about him. That kind of praise must thrill him.
I enjoyed this read.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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"Punchinello , the assassin" is just as horrid in this episode as the previous.
I liked how he was able to eavesdrop on the conversations being had about him. That kind of praise must thrill him.
I enjoyed this read.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- quite the sociopathic little sicko there, yeah? Another step toward the Sheriff's demise...perhaps?? Hmmmm..... Thanx for sharing and introducing them to us! ;) Yvette
P.S. Sorry, no list or catches this time...lol! Enjoy your style, sir! ;)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Wow -- quite the sociopathic little sicko there, yeah? Another step toward the Sheriff's demise...perhaps?? Hmmmm..... Thanx for sharing and introducing them to us! ;) Yvette
P.S. Sorry, no list or catches this time...lol! Enjoy your style, sir! ;)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. What, no recommendations? Feel free to make them any time.
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LOL!! If there's one thing I have never been able to change my entire life, it's this need to always be honest... now, that's not to say that I haven't mastered 'tactfulness' (lol!), but I will always be straight up with ya!! ;) Enjoy this evening, Sir Brett, and may tomorrow be the start of a wonderful decade!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is an interesting story from what I can tell. the main character has a unique name, which makes him more memorable, and I like the use of the word "remanding". keep up the great work ^.^
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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this is an interesting story from what I can tell. the main character has a unique name, which makes him more memorable, and I like the use of the word "remanding". keep up the great work ^.^
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. The bad guy needed a unique name. Believe it adds more flair to my book. Appreciate the review.
