Aching Bones
Never give in to old age aches and pains!45 total reviews
Comment from persevere
For me,this is an introduction to a dietelle poem . It appealed to me even before I read about .the required rhyming structure. Obviously there is nothing forced about your rhyming. Enjoy your last fling at the gym!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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For me,this is an introduction to a dietelle poem . It appealed to me even before I read about .the required rhyming structure. Obviously there is nothing forced about your rhyming. Enjoy your last fling at the gym!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I will certainly do so, aching bones or no...
Comment from Susan Larson
What a challenge to write a poem with such a strange syllable count , yet you seem to have done it quite well keeping a nice flow and conveying such a humorous message about the aging process.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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What a challenge to write a poem with such a strange syllable count , yet you seem to have done it quite well keeping a nice flow and conveying such a humorous message about the aging process.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Susan, it was much more difficult than I realized...I look forward to reading yours..
Comment from Janilou
I love your poem. After recent surgery on my knee, I discovered that some pain medications cause more harm than good! I can certainly relate to this poem and I agree! I'm happy to be medication free! Lol
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I love your poem. After recent surgery on my knee, I discovered that some pain medications cause more harm than good! I can certainly relate to this poem and I agree! I'm happy to be medication free! Lol
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Janilou, Yes I know, my is recovering form compound fractures of her femur and left wrist plus a new left hip prosthesis --We are pleased is have been able to handle the majority of the pain with few narcotics.
Comment from papa55mike
I've read several of these entries today and I like this one. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Happy Holidays and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I've read several of these entries today and I like this one. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Happy Holidays and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Mike, my friend, be safe and God bless you back!
Comment from RodG
You handled the challenge of a diatelle very well, especially your choice of rhymes. It is easy to relate to your Speaker who's aching and feeling his age, yet retains a positive attitude.
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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You handled the challenge of a diatelle very well, especially your choice of rhymes. It is easy to relate to your Speaker who's aching and feeling his age, yet retains a positive attitude.
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Every day is a banquet!
