Aching Bones
Never give in to old age aches and pains!45 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
It seems as though everyone has a remedy for every ailment including bones and pain. 700 club has something interesting about building a better gut. I am trying it and it seems to work.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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It seems as though everyone has a remedy for every ailment including bones and pain. 700 club has something interesting about building a better gut. I am trying it and it seems to work.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Ben, I am starting the new year walking 3 miles, five days a week. Something has to work! I do nt want to give any more calories... LOL
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Let me know how you come out
Comment from TPAC
Sound like a losing battle, surrendering you to an at ease living style harmful to your health. Too comfortable in my opinion, needing also to apply myself to exercising to resolve my own issues. All stated in my opinion.
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Sound like a losing battle, surrendering you to an at ease living style harmful to your health. Too comfortable in my opinion, needing also to apply myself to exercising to resolve my own issues. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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TPAC, I am committing to start off increasing my walking distance an additional mile (3 total) to add 1/2 mile every other month so at the end of 2020, I will be averaging 5.5 miles a day five x week!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I must admit the aching bones title drew me in as mine have been giving me curry of late. Well told of your strive to get on top of the aches in this Diatelle form.
cheers and good luck in the contest.
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I must admit the aching bones title drew me in as mine have been giving me curry of late. Well told of your strive to get on top of the aches in this Diatelle form.
cheers and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Pearl, thank you very much!
Comment from BeasPeas
Your Diatelle poem is really well done. You've made it rhyme with good word choices. The image is perfect. You've described what we all know--ageing isn't for the faint of heart. I particularly like:
"I take the aches in stride
loving with zing
with my pride
inside!"
Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Your Diatelle poem is really well done. You've made it rhyme with good word choices. The image is perfect. You've described what we all know--ageing isn't for the faint of heart. I particularly like:
"I take the aches in stride
loving with zing
with my pride
inside!"
Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Smiling back and grateful for a new day!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Boy, what a challenging form! And one I've never tried. I hear great perfect rhymes, and I like this line: The gym, it will be my last fling! I think it will impress readers for that diatelle prompt. Worthy share!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Boy, what a challenging form! And one I've never tried. I hear great perfect rhymes, and I like this line: The gym, it will be my last fling! I think it will impress readers for that diatelle prompt. Worthy share!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Crystie, thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem. I enjoyed the challenge of this poetic style.
Comment from Janet Foor
A really well written diatelle with perfect syllable count and set rhyme.
I have not tried one of these. It looks challenging but could be fun.
Well done.
Blessings and Happy New Year.
Janet
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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A really well written diatelle with perfect syllable count and set rhyme.
I have not tried one of these. It looks challenging but could be fun.
Well done.
Blessings and Happy New Year.
Janet
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Janet, thank you for reviewing and commenting on my poem. I enjoyed the challenge of this poetic style.
Give it a go and let me know :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
I know, these new aches and pains are no fun. Guess we just have to live with them. I, for one, refuse to take a pill for every tinge. Resides doesn't need the apostrophe. They're for possessives or contractions. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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I know, these new aches and pains are no fun. Guess we just have to live with them. I, for one, refuse to take a pill for every tinge. Resides doesn't need the apostrophe. They're for possessives or contractions. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Cindy, thank you, I corrected this error, thanks for the assist!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
True this old bones are playing tricks on us immediately after we reach our forty years mark... and all goes down the hill. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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True this old bones are playing tricks on us immediately after we reach our forty years mark... and all goes down the hill. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Iza, yes, however, I notice most of us do keep going onward...
Comment from Gail Denham
Boy can I relate - my aching bones and muscles and joints. And they do not let up. One just keeps moving, keeps going. Good poem to lament this situation.
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Boy can I relate - my aching bones and muscles and joints. And they do not let up. One just keeps moving, keeps going. Good poem to lament this situation.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Gail, thank you!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking poem to which I easily related - well narrated in its adherence to the prompt, in addition to its effortless appearing rhyming rhythm. Best wishes in the contest...
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In my opinion, a striking poem to which I easily related - well narrated in its adherence to the prompt, in addition to its effortless appearing rhyming rhythm. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Thanks much!
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You are very welcome indeed...Eve
