And I Said, Welcome...
to the Boomtown19 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
The cat seems so introspective and serious. It looks like it is contemplating a kiss to start a possible liaison.
This is a good poem about the first time a couple makes love.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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The cat seems so introspective and serious. It looks like it is contemplating a kiss to start a possible liaison.
This is a good poem about the first time a couple makes love.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Joan. You interpret well. Doug
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You are most kindly welcome. Thanks for the compliment, Doug.
Joan
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful romance poem dear doug! i definitely agree with you wholeheartedly as the kiss is the first step for foreplay.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a larger than life squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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this is a beautiful romance poem dear doug! i definitely agree with you wholeheartedly as the kiss is the first step for foreplay.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a larger than life squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Ha ha. I love it. More reviewers are "getting" it. Thanks. Doug
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A beautiful passage through time, a memory that landed with a kiss, a pass through the door a bliss. Thank you for sharing and Merry Christmas. Good luck with your future poems.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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A beautiful passage through time, a memory that landed with a kiss, a pass through the door a bliss. Thank you for sharing and Merry Christmas. Good luck with your future poems.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Iza.
Comment from Sugarray77
This beautifully presented verse seems to float on the page as it descends into a lovely and fitting ending. I enjoyed reading and the use of repetitive phrases really added emphasis and strength to this one. Well done victor.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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This beautifully presented verse seems to float on the page as it descends into a lovely and fitting ending. I enjoyed reading and the use of repetitive phrases really added emphasis and strength to this one. Well done victor.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Melissa. Doug
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work. very attractive and I liked the style of the poem and will try it out. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work. very attractive and I liked the style of the poem and will try it out. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much. Doug
Comment from catch22
Hello there Poet, what a heartfelt and soulful write! I loved the theme and formatting in this write. I see this as a poem about how lonely the fast paced and high tech life can be. In a boomtown, immediate gratification is a solace to distract from the lack of connection. Excellent use of word economy and sparse styling to paint this image.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Hello there Poet, what a heartfelt and soulful write! I loved the theme and formatting in this write. I see this as a poem about how lonely the fast paced and high tech life can be. In a boomtown, immediate gratification is a solace to distract from the lack of connection. Excellent use of word economy and sparse styling to paint this image.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Superb interpret. I always learn about what I wrote from the reviewer. lol Merry Christmas. Doug
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. My suggestion would be to make your message clearer. I am not sure that I understood what you were trying to say.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. My suggestion would be to make your message clearer. I am not sure that I understood what you were trying to say.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Me neither. Lol. Merry Christmas. I write in Gestalt style. Shut off the frontal cortex. feel. Doug
Comment from estory
You really spanned the range of emotion in love in this poem, the pain, the sadness, the pleasure and the joy, the transformative process of it. I loved the sense of rhythm that gently rocks us through the mist in this one. estory
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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You really spanned the range of emotion in love in this poem, the pain, the sadness, the pleasure and the joy, the transformative process of it. I loved the sense of rhythm that gently rocks us through the mist in this one. estory
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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You my man. Thank you. Merry Christmas, my friend.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem contemplating about the little things in life that can make a huge difference in our lives when we notice they are there and make use of them when we have the chance.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem contemplating about the little things in life that can make a huge difference in our lives when we notice they are there and make use of them when we have the chance.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not quite sure what this poem is about except to say that the cat feels safe behind the glass and in his comfort he can muse about the outside world as he is protected. The barriers in life are sometimes what we rely upon, Merry Christmas Victor, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Not quite sure what this poem is about except to say that the cat feels safe behind the glass and in his comfort he can muse about the outside world as he is protected. The barriers in life are sometimes what we rely upon, Merry Christmas Victor, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Dolly. Doug
