Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, you made me smile here Jen and this is a tribute to Fanstory friends who always read our work, even when we are not always on form, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019

Thanks a lot. Jen. X

Comment from Therese Caron

Excellent

This is wonderful and funny at the same time. The colors are perfect, and the image you chose is a great complement to your poem. I love the word you chose, there were a great laugh. This is a great 20 syllables poem, and I think a good contest entry. Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019

Many thanks. So glad you enjoyed it

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I enjoyed this, thanks. And thanks for the good wishes. You've made good use of your twenty syllables and made me smile with your end comment. I hope you have a great Christmas too.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019

Thanks Judy. Merry Christmas.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written twenty syllable poem and a wonderful greeting to all the writers who read your work and whose you also read.

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019

Thanks Sandra

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a funny entry for the 20 syllables writing prompt.
But I count 21 Syllables. Am I wrong, or was this intentional?
Best of luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019

Thank you so much Sharon. I've changed it.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

Ha, ha, this one made me chuckle and ain't it the truth. This is an appropriate entry in terms of meter. The picture works well with the poem. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019

Thanks Susan

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

Ha, ha! Short, punchy lines with a "shite" message {winks}.

I find your text/background color combination hard to read. My eyes need a better contrast.

Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019

Thanks Alex

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A bit of shite's always welcome. Ask any gardener. Wishing you a very happy Christmas and an excellent growing season in 2020. I'm sure that there'll be some beautiful blooms to come.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019

Thanks and same to you. Have a good one.