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The Real Reason

A contest entry

15 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a lovely tale of the humility and truth behind Christmas. I love the tradition that you have developed invoked by 'The concept is that whatever kind of cake is made, it is decorated with white icing, blue lettering and a single candle. The youngest person at the table gets to blow out the candle. The lettering says, 'Happy Birthday Jesus', and the child starts the singing of the happy birthday song'.
I think it is very important to escape from the overcommercialisation of Christmas. My first grandson is just one year old, and his (very religious) parents have decided that each person may only give one present to the infant.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
    Thank you Katherine for reviewing and your kind comments. Oh the memories that can be made with a little one. Holiday Blessings.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Neat tradition explained and detailed. I had heard of it before in passing somewhere, but how amazing someone here can actually explain it from start to finish. I like the idea of having the children get involved in the choice of cake, because it personalizes their feelings about the time of year and Jesus, too. I don't know if Jell-O minds being spelled out all the way. Thanks for posting!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
    Thank you Crystie for reviewing and your great kind comments, Holiday Blessings.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this Christmas story about how your family celebrates Christmas with a certain tradition. I like the idea of finding a way to make it more special and meaningful to the individuals there. Merry Christmas!
Bill

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
    Thank you Bill for reviewing and your kind words, Holiday Blessings.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Christmas Story contest.
Your lovely story of family traditions is very well told.
I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
    Thank you share for reviewing and your kind words and wishes. Holiday Blessings.
Comment from robyn corum
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Alie,

Sounds like your family has a lot to be thankful for when you all get together. Besides a big loving family, you have a wonderful matriarch (you!) and a loving God who watches over all. Nicely written and thank you for sharing. Lovely job!

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
    Thank you Robyn for reviewing and your kind comments. Holiday Blessings.