Christmas
3-5-3 Poem16 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Your 3-5-3 poem is like a Christmas card for the season.
Children will be waiting for those gifts
sneaking out Christmas morning to see what is under the tree.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Your 3-5-3 poem is like a Christmas card for the season.
Children will be waiting for those gifts
sneaking out Christmas morning to see what is under the tree.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very interesting offering for this contest of such a limited format -- Christmas is Christmas gifts...hmmm. Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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A very interesting offering for this contest of such a limited format -- Christmas is Christmas gifts...hmmm. Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a lovely 353 entry. The picture you chose and your background color really grab the attention of the reader. That shouldn't seem so important but when you're scanning through, it does make a difference. The words are beautiful and the whole thing makes me feel very Christmasy. I need that this year so I thank you for that! Thank you so much for sharing this.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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This is a lovely 353 entry. The picture you chose and your background color really grab the attention of the reader. That shouldn't seem so important but when you're scanning through, it does make a difference. The words are beautiful and the whole thing makes me feel very Christmasy. I need that this year so I thank you for that! Thank you so much for sharing this.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yes, yes it is. The children are chomping at the bit, waiting for the day to arrive. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Yes, yes it is. The children are chomping at the bit, waiting for the day to arrive. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Ben Colder
I see nothing wrong with this poem. Lookas if a good contest piece to me. I do hope you and your family a very Merry Christmas with lots of gifts. Thnnks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I see nothing wrong with this poem. Lookas if a good contest piece to me. I do hope you and your family a very Merry Christmas with lots of gifts. Thnnks for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
