Christmas
3-5-3 Poem16 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem.l enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. It's very suitable for this competition. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Nice poem.l enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. It's very suitable for this competition. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from QC Poet
Format compliant offering containing a Great image. While it is nice to give and receive Christmas Gifts with great joy and delight ~ the real gift is our Sinfulness forgiveness due to the Birth of Jesus Christ. Not to preach but it's become something of an afterthought these days.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Format compliant offering containing a Great image. While it is nice to give and receive Christmas Gifts with great joy and delight ~ the real gift is our Sinfulness forgiveness due to the Birth of Jesus Christ. Not to preach but it's become something of an afterthought these days.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from GE Parson
Hiya Raul,
I counted the syllables and sure enough, you have 3-5-3of them, qualifying this for a contest. I like your subject matter. The greatest Christmas gift is God's gift of salvation. Merry Christmas -Parson
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Hiya Raul,
I counted the syllables and sure enough, you have 3-5-3of them, qualifying this for a contest. I like your subject matter. The greatest Christmas gift is God's gift of salvation. Merry Christmas -Parson
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from Alchera
It is as you said above all for the children and grandchildren etc. But Christmas is more than that because at least for my family. It is the joyful relatives' meeting from anywhere and all the surrounding Christmas games and jokes to be together again.Your 3/5/3 writing prompt entry is perfectly set within its syllables counting and its gifts' giving narrative storylined content. Good Job.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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It is as you said above all for the children and grandchildren etc. But Christmas is more than that because at least for my family. It is the joyful relatives' meeting from anywhere and all the surrounding Christmas games and jokes to be together again.Your 3/5/3 writing prompt entry is perfectly set within its syllables counting and its gifts' giving narrative storylined content. Good Job.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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I always do, dear friend of mine! Blessings from Italy and Tony
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Christmas, has the proper formatting and reminds us that the season of giving is here and the time of receiving goes with it.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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This 3-5-3, Christmas, has the proper formatting and reminds us that the season of giving is here and the time of receiving goes with it.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Your cute verse is a good match for the artwork.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Your cute verse is a good match for the artwork.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I love the presentation of this little poem -- you have an artist's eye, IMO.
But I am not sure I agree with the message of your poem, unless the most important gift is the one we are rejoicing in... The Saviour's birth.
But technically your poem is perfect in syllable count, and content is only something we can comment upon, not base the review upon. Five stars for excellent crafting! Nicely done.
Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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I love the presentation of this little poem -- you have an artist's eye, IMO.
But I am not sure I agree with the message of your poem, unless the most important gift is the one we are rejoicing in... The Saviour's birth.
But technically your poem is perfect in syllable count, and content is only something we can comment upon, not base the review upon. Five stars for excellent crafting! Nicely done.
Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thank you! Thanks for the five stars! I appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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You are very welcome. The only other thing I might mention is the way you have written it, it is Christmas doing the rejoicing, but it's really us, right?(Christmas is the 'subject'.) I might suggest that second line could be something like: "...here so we enjoy..." Wishing you rich blessings, and good luck in the booth. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Christmas is exciting and we never tire of the celebration and I look forward to it every year! Your poem is uplifting and I enjoyed it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Christmas is exciting and we never tire of the celebration and I look forward to it every year! Your poem is uplifting and I enjoyed it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from RShipp
I know that there will be many happy faces come that morning.
The picture brings back memories of The Santa Clause movies.
I enjoyed the read.
My best wishes for you with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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I know that there will be many happy faces come that morning.
The picture brings back memories of The Santa Clause movies.
I enjoyed the read.
My best wishes for you with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Ogden
I certainly think that's what the children still believe, or thousands of former Santa Clauses would have flooded the Christmas month jobs market, and so many people would be out of work that the retail businesses would suffer, but parents would get better deals on toys, which would please those already rejoicing children.
(As I said earlier, the rapacious children probably haven't changed, so my speculation is neither here nor there. Thanks, though for the food for thought.)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I certainly think that's what the children still believe, or thousands of former Santa Clauses would have flooded the Christmas month jobs market, and so many people would be out of work that the retail businesses would suffer, but parents would get better deals on toys, which would please those already rejoicing children.
(As I said earlier, the rapacious children probably haven't changed, so my speculation is neither here nor there. Thanks, though for the food for thought.)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you, and you're welcome! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!
