The Elves' Ace in the Hole
Santa & Mrs. Claus on the Elf labor dispute19 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, hello there, my friend. Well, you certainly made me laugh, hahaha, so did the picture. (Hilarious) This is a great entry for the contest.
Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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lol, hello there, my friend. Well, you certainly made me laugh, hahaha, so did the picture. (Hilarious) This is a great entry for the contest.
Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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This was just plain fun, Kerry -- so glad you enjoyed! And to know that I made you laugh....? Well, then my work here is done! ;) Thanx for the review and Happy Christmasing out there! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome. Sorry for the late response.
Comment from NickieT
I love this pairing. It is both festive and funny - just as the prompt asked for. The idea of elves working for pay is also a funny notion considering how they are portrayed in the stories
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I love this pairing. It is both festive and funny - just as the prompt asked for. The idea of elves working for pay is also a funny notion considering how they are portrayed in the stories
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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LOL!! I had fun with this one, Nickie -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it, too! ;) :) And if you are smiling, ma'am, then my work here is done! :) :) Take care and Happy Christmasing! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gail Denham
Well cute - and the limericks work well - didn't know elves got paid - but I reckon strikes happen everywhere. Good job with the cute poems. If they dont' get a raise they may put a doll's head on backward or leave off the tires of a toy car.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Well cute - and the limericks work well - didn't know elves got paid - but I reckon strikes happen everywhere. Good job with the cute poems. If they dont' get a raise they may put a doll's head on backward or leave off the tires of a toy car.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much, Gail!!
Comment from sunnilicious
Ooo Santa baby... How to make that artwork come to life for me... Lolz.
Well thought out. Clearly and creatively written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imageries. Good sense of humor. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Ooo Santa baby... How to make that artwork come to life for me... Lolz.
Well thought out. Clearly and creatively written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imageries. Good sense of humor. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Lol! Glad you enjoyed - thanks for your review and Happy Christmasing!
Comment from Bill Schott
This dual limerick holiday poem, The Elves Ace in the Hole, has the general formatting, twice, and allows that Mrs' Claus is a Labor backer. Bargaining is lopsided.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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This dual limerick holiday poem, The Elves Ace in the Hole, has the general formatting, twice, and allows that Mrs' Claus is a Labor backer. Bargaining is lopsided.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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LOL!! :) Thanks for the review, Bill! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile, a fun pair of Limericks, I stumbles a bit on the meter but the sentiments made me laugh and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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This made me smile, a fun pair of Limericks, I stumbles a bit on the meter but the sentiments made me laugh and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Holiday Dualing Limericks writing prompt.
This is a side of Mr and Mrs Santa that we've not seen before.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Holiday Dualing Limericks writing prompt.
This is a side of Mr and Mrs Santa that we've not seen before.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is clever, cute, funny, and very well thought out. This Santa looks like bodybuilder Santa. He might get into a wee bit of trouble coming down some lonely women's chimneys. He might not have to worry about Mrs. Claus. He would have to restrain himself from partaking of forbidden fruit. I enjoyed this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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This is clever, cute, funny, and very well thought out. This Santa looks like bodybuilder Santa. He might get into a wee bit of trouble coming down some lonely women's chimneys. He might not have to worry about Mrs. Claus. He would have to restrain himself from partaking of forbidden fruit. I enjoyed this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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LOL! Oh, but us moms out here like to fantasize around this busy time, don't cha know, Jeffrey?! Thanx so much and Happy Christmasing from here to there!
Comment from Barbaraj1
LOL. Such a cute poem. This really brought a smile to my face as I read
it. Mrs. Clause describes Santa as Tarzan. I think it has a very good chance
of winning the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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LOL. Such a cute poem. This really brought a smile to my face as I read
it. Mrs. Clause describes Santa as Tarzan. I think it has a very good chance
of winning the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Lol! Thanx for your review, Barbaraj1 -- Happy Christmasing to you from here to there!
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is cute. Yes, the Christmas season and everyone feels entitled to a raise, especially those hard, over worked elves. Well, this is funny. May you have a Merry Christmas, and get at least a snuggle.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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This is cute. Yes, the Christmas season and everyone feels entitled to a raise, especially those hard, over worked elves. Well, this is funny. May you have a Merry Christmas, and get at least a snuggle.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Lol! Thanx for your review, Bobby Jo -- Happy Christmasing to you from here to there!
