Tanka(baby emperor)
Penguin dancing the flapper28 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a cute picture and a good ekphrastic poem to go with it. It does look like this baby penguin is dancing.
Hope your Christmas was a great one.
Hope you heal quickly and are able to type painlessly soon
Joan
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This is a cute picture and a good ekphrastic poem to go with it. It does look like this baby penguin is dancing.
Hope your Christmas was a great one.
Hope you heal quickly and are able to type painlessly soon
Joan
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
Comment from elainec4
Enjoyed reading your work. Your humor and personality seem to be shining through. Tanka is not an easy form to write. Your words and images are precise and clear. I love your artwork which is the perfect complement to your words. Hope your neck procedure goes well.
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Enjoyed reading your work. Your humor and personality seem to be shining through. Tanka is not an easy form to write. Your words and images are precise and clear. I love your artwork which is the perfect complement to your words. Hope your neck procedure goes well.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
Comment from Ogden
Very cute poem, with an educational bonus. The only flappers I was aware of was those dizzy gals in the 1920's. Now I nw about that new dance.
I'm sorry to hear about your neck, Pam. May you be sticking it out again soon!
Don
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Very cute poem, with an educational bonus. The only flappers I was aware of was those dizzy gals in the 1920's. Now I nw about that new dance.
I'm sorry to hear about your neck, Pam. May you be sticking it out again soon!
Don
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I think this is one of
your best paintings, Pam.
-It is really cute.
-Sorry to hear about
your neck, but good wishes
and thoughts are being sent your way.
-You have written a good tanka
with effective opening lines,
and a good pivot line.
-I also like how you use
personification, and the
concluding lines are very good, too.
-Take care, and be well.
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-I think this is one of
your best paintings, Pam.
-It is really cute.
-Sorry to hear about
your neck, but good wishes
and thoughts are being sent your way.
-You have written a good tanka
with effective opening lines,
and a good pivot line.
-I also like how you use
personification, and the
concluding lines are very good, too.
-Take care, and be well.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
Comment from Bobby Jo
Awe... Christmas time, a time to dance, a time to be with family and teach the little ones how to belong into the crazy family. This is cute, thanks for sharing.
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Awe... Christmas time, a time to dance, a time to be with family and teach the little ones how to belong into the crazy family. This is cute, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
Comment from lauralumummu
This is really cute I am sorry to hear about your neck. I pray all goes well. I love your poem and the informative authors' note. The picture is really cute. God bless, Laura.
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This is really cute I am sorry to hear about your neck. I pray all goes well. I love your poem and the informative authors' note. The picture is really cute. God bless, Laura.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Pam, this is a cute tanka - true to form and I love your painting of the little penguin - really sweet. Have a lovely Christmas and all the best for the New Year to you and yours - love Dorothy xx
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Hello Pam, this is a cute tanka - true to form and I love your painting of the little penguin - really sweet. Have a lovely Christmas and all the best for the New Year to you and yours - love Dorothy xx
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
Comment from Janetsue
I am so sorry to hear about your neck pain. Please do whatever you have to do to get well. Neck and spinal pain is horrible!
Loved reading your cute penguin poem about that little feathered dancer! Big hugs, Janet
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I am so sorry to hear about your neck pain. Please do whatever you have to do to get well. Neck and spinal pain is horrible!
Loved reading your cute penguin poem about that little feathered dancer! Big hugs, Janet
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
Comment from w.j.debi
What an endearing little character you have created in this baby emperor penguin. It is fun to imagine him dancing around enjoying the snowflakes as his backdrop and partners in the dance.
I hope you recover soon. Have a happy holiday.
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What an endearing little character you have created in this baby emperor penguin. It is fun to imagine him dancing around enjoying the snowflakes as his backdrop and partners in the dance.
I hope you recover soon. Have a happy holiday.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
I am sorry about your neck - I had two vertebraes fused also - right at top of neck - wearing that brace for weeks gave me a new appreciation of freedom - but the bad pain was gone, thank the Lord.
Cute poem - I love the image of the flapping wings. I pray your surgery goes well.
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I am sorry about your neck - I had two vertebraes fused also - right at top of neck - wearing that brace for weeks gave me a new appreciation of freedom - but the bad pain was gone, thank the Lord.
Cute poem - I love the image of the flapping wings. I pray your surgery goes well.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
