Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this. You're beautiful, clever, and colorful wording is well placed and well thought out. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done and good luck n the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review Jeffrey. I did spend some time at fanart until I found the perfect artwork to go with it. haha
Have a great day, cheers.

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your Naani poem and found the title you chose to be reflected in the wonderful image you selected. I just love rainbows.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Kind regards.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks for the insightful review. It was fun to write, cheers.

reply by moonsunrise on 17-Dec-2019

My pleasure.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Your whimsical refraction resonates with me. Do like your ability to add complementary colors (golden and pewter) to the rainbow you describe.

Good illustration also to reinforce your Naani entry.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks for the insightful review, It was a fun write, cheers.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the A Rainbow writing prompt.
Your verse is a mix of whimsy and science.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks for the insightful review Sharon. It was fun to write. Have a great Sunday, cheers.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A clever combination of artistic poetic description juxtaposed with some scientific fact and under the umbrella of such a fitting title - an appropriate visual

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. Have a wonderful Sunday, cheers.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

There is always the question of which came first, the chicken or the egg. I am betting you found and were inspired by the great picture. Even, if not... the go great together!

"Drenched, golden fields bow
'neath pewter skies." .... That is a great line(s)!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Haha I worked hard for that artwork. twenty minutes at fanart I'll never get back.Thanks for the review, cheers.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love rainbows and this is an unusual one and we can't guarantee the sky will be bright and the rainbow takes a chance here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks for the review Dolly, I worked hard for that artwork, haha Have a wonderful Sunday, cheers.