I Lost It After The Party
Possibly a common occurrence.4 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Wow. Yeah, that would definitely be worth an argument. A girl shouldn't have to worry about waking up and finding herself in that state. A guy should be enough of a gentleman to know that she's not able to give INFORMED consent under that situation. --sigh--
This was well written and sad - because I'm sure you're right and this does happen all too often. Nice job. Good luck!
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Wow. Yeah, that would definitely be worth an argument. A girl shouldn't have to worry about waking up and finding herself in that state. A guy should be enough of a gentleman to know that she's not able to give INFORMED consent under that situation. --sigh--
This was well written and sad - because I'm sure you're right and this does happen all too often. Nice job. Good luck!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
Comment from Iza Deleanu
That it's a big lost and i perfectly understand your frustration and hurt: you wanted to be something special and perfect at the right time with the right person, you wanted to make a difference to be a beautiful memory, but now is gone. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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That it's a big lost and i perfectly understand your frustration and hurt: you wanted to be something special and perfect at the right time with the right person, you wanted to make a difference to be a beautiful memory, but now is gone. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
Comment from LeannaP
Yes its important to have self control.
Its significant.
I like the manner in which you write.
You write well and it shows.
You write with depth and precision.
Leanna
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Yes its important to have self control.
Its significant.
I like the manner in which you write.
You write well and it shows.
You write with depth and precision.
Leanna
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a well written flash that fully describes the consequences of losing control of lucid thoughts and actions while under the influence of alcohol. You set the story up well and deftly structured this write to capture both plot and ending. Well done.
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This is a well written flash that fully describes the consequences of losing control of lucid thoughts and actions while under the influence of alcohol. You set the story up well and deftly structured this write to capture both plot and ending. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
