Honeybee Handbook
A Quatern for the Potlatch Challenge14 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very cute and very well written poem called the Honeybee Handbook. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. It made a lot of good sense. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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June, This is a very cute and very well written poem called the Honeybee Handbook. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. It made a lot of good sense. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
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I'm glad you like this silly little piece!
Comment from Bro0ksi8
Wow, you made sure "Do your job and make some honey" was in each stanza and the placement was especially effective in getting your point across. I like how you compared working with bee's making honey. Also it's a metaphor for how a person should view what they do at work. For example, "the cute white bunny" represents anything that might attract your attention away from making honey. Great Job! Loved it!
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Wow, you made sure "Do your job and make some honey" was in each stanza and the placement was especially effective in getting your point across. I like how you compared working with bee's making honey. Also it's a metaphor for how a person should view what they do at work. For example, "the cute white bunny" represents anything that might attract your attention away from making honey. Great Job! Loved it!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this quatern, June, because (1) its message can apply to all of us who are inclined to slack off, (2) it describes in a light-hearted way why honey bees are so important in our lives, and (3) the refrain works so well in every stanza. Rod
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I enjoyed this quatern, June, because (1) its message can apply to all of us who are inclined to slack off, (2) it describes in a light-hearted way why honey bees are so important in our lives, and (3) the refrain works so well in every stanza. Rod
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
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Glad you could see how it would apply to us humans as well. Thanks for stopping by to share your thoughts.
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My pleasure.
Comment from JLR
June what a delightful, rhythmic Quatern for the Potlatch Challenge! A superior photo marries well with your wonderful, cheery stanza's. Always my pleasure to read what you come up with in these challenges. Thank you for sharing. JLR
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June what a delightful, rhythmic Quatern for the Potlatch Challenge! A superior photo marries well with your wonderful, cheery stanza's. Always my pleasure to read what you come up with in these challenges. Thank you for sharing. JLR
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece! Just a light hearted one for a change. Thanks for reading.
