Honeybee Handbook
A Quatern for the Potlatch Challenge14 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
They do say we would be in trouble if we lost the bees, for they are hard workers who do much for us. Enjoyed your quatern about the busy little bees, great rhyming and your repeat line worked well throughout. Nicely done June.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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They do say we would be in trouble if we lost the bees, for they are hard workers who do much for us. Enjoyed your quatern about the busy little bees, great rhyming and your repeat line worked well throughout. Nicely done June.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece.
Comment from patcelaw
As a society we must guard the honeybees so that there will be the pollination needed to grow our crops. Thanks for writing this informative poem about honeybees.
Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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As a society we must guard the honeybees so that there will be the pollination needed to grow our crops. Thanks for writing this informative poem about honeybees.
Patricia
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this piece on the bumblebee! Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your appealing title and matching artwork. Your cascading line plus rhymes and rhythm are very effective in this Quatern. Here's to surviving and using bees and butterflies as our role models! -Joan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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I enjoyed your appealing title and matching artwork. Your cascading line plus rhymes and rhythm are very effective in this Quatern. Here's to surviving and using bees and butterflies as our role models! -Joan
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. Glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this nature write June, the bees are industrious, not sure the butterflies are too, I think they love fluttering, but I consider them playful. Perfect rhyming and formation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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I loved this nature write June, the bees are industrious, not sure the butterflies are too, I think they love fluttering, but I consider them playful. Perfect rhyming and formation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Dolly. Glad you enjoyed this silly little piece. Been cold and rainy here. So I decided to think about butterflies and bees instead!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a terrific quatern, June. Lovely metre and rhymes and most importantly the message is excellent!
Do your job and make some honey. That's a very good saying in my opinion.
Well, well done. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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This is a terrific quatern, June. Lovely metre and rhymes and most importantly the message is excellent!
Do your job and make some honey. That's a very good saying in my opinion.
Well, well done. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Can apply to us humans as well! So glad you enjoyed this silly little piece. Appreciate the feedback as well as the generous rating!
Comment from damommy
I like this poem about the honeybee, and how you admonish him to do his job. It's very pleasant to read on this cold, dreary day. Good entry for the challenge.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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I like this poem about the honeybee, and how you admonish him to do his job. It's very pleasant to read on this cold, dreary day. Good entry for the challenge.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from royowen
I love the masterful way in which you took control and fitted the repeating line so beautifully June, these clubs are great for writing these poems with your considerable talent on display. Smoothly delivered and sweetly rhymed and scribed, a great post June, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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I love the masterful way in which you took control and fitted the repeating line so beautifully June, these clubs are great for writing these poems with your considerable talent on display. Smoothly delivered and sweetly rhymed and scribed, a great post June, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments.
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My pleasure
Comment from lauralumummu
Honey bees are so important and interesting to watch. Well written poem with a matter of fact flow. I like it and the picture too. Merry Christmas. All the best, Laura.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Honey bees are so important and interesting to watch. Well written poem with a matter of fact flow. I like it and the picture too. Merry Christmas. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello June. This is exemplary and a wonderful response to the prompt. I loved the rollicking rhythm and fun theme. Get busy!!! I really enjoyed it!
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Hello June. This is exemplary and a wonderful response to the prompt. I loved the rollicking rhythm and fun theme. Get busy!!! I really enjoyed it!
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from BeasPeas
This Quatern is SO nicely composed, June. I love it and would award a sixer if I had one. The poem flows along at a nice pace. Rhyming and repeating line are super. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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This Quatern is SO nicely composed, June. I love it and would award a sixer if I had one. The poem flows along at a nice pace. Rhyming and repeating line are super. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Always nice to hear from you.
