Rich Dad
I feel lonely and neglected16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about having all the luxury in the world, the best clothes money can buy but the father who supply all these things never have the time to spend with us.
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A very well-written poem about having all the luxury in the world, the best clothes money can buy but the father who supply all these things never have the time to spend with us.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Thanks Sandra
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very emotional poem that speaks to the heart of most of us. We do need money, but in the end, the only thing that counts is being with someone that we love and that loves us. Sharing is supreme! The composition is very flowing and rhythmic. The meaning is so clear.
Lovely work.
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This is a very emotional poem that speaks to the heart of most of us. We do need money, but in the end, the only thing that counts is being with someone that we love and that loves us. Sharing is supreme! The composition is very flowing and rhythmic. The meaning is so clear.
Lovely work.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Tha k you so uch
Comment from Gail Denham
I think so many kids have this wish - the desire to have a dad to spend time with them - not always be out earning money - for you to spend - but money is not substitute.
good poem
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I think so many kids have this wish - the desire to have a dad to spend time with them - not always be out earning money - for you to spend - but money is not substitute.
good poem
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Thanks Gail
Comment from the13thpoet
A terrific Thursday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. it had a nice flow and the rhymes were good. It was also thought provoking as it shows that money is no substitute for time. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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A terrific Thursday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. it had a nice flow and the rhymes were good. It was also thought provoking as it shows that money is no substitute for time. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from RodG
I like this contest entry because (1) it characterizes the rich dad so well as someone who treats his daughter as property, (2) it also shows how the Speaker lives in luxury but is lonely and neglected, and (3) because of the flawless cadence of each quatrain. Rod
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I like this contest entry because (1) it characterizes the rich dad so well as someone who treats his daughter as property, (2) it also shows how the Speaker lives in luxury but is lonely and neglected, and (3) because of the flawless cadence of each quatrain. Rod
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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I love your review Rod. Thanks a lot.
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You are very welcome. Rod
Comment from Alex Rosel
Oh, this poem expresses a "cutting" sentiment. Time, not money, is perhaps any relationship's strongest foundation {thumbs up}.
The punchy delivery is indicative of discontent, so it's befitting.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
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Oh, this poem expresses a "cutting" sentiment. Time, not money, is perhaps any relationship's strongest foundation {thumbs up}.
The punchy delivery is indicative of discontent, so it's befitting.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
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Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
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Thanks a lot Alex
