John Shane & The Dairy Farmer
Humorous western script27 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, gal, this is knee-slapin good. You see, I really got into the story theme, haha. Great characterization here and the dialogue was fun and moved this along nicely. Loved the ending - really whimsical. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Well, gal, this is knee-slapin good. You see, I really got into the story theme, haha. Great characterization here and the dialogue was fun and moved this along nicely. Loved the ending - really whimsical. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you bunches for your review!
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Crystie. A fun script. It's easy to see that the language barrier can confuse everyone with mispronunciations for an amusing story. I don't think I'd make out any better if I were learning a new one. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Hi Crystie. A fun script. It's easy to see that the language barrier can confuse everyone with mispronunciations for an amusing story. I don't think I'd make out any better if I were learning a new one. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn, for reviewing today!
Comment from LeannaP
Hi there!
I liked the character of Swen Dee.
I really felt like you understand what it means to write in a way that holds readers attention.
You write with depth.
I couldn't find any grammatical errors.
Nice work!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Hi there!
I liked the character of Swen Dee.
I really felt like you understand what it means to write in a way that holds readers attention.
You write with depth.
I couldn't find any grammatical errors.
Nice work!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing today, Leanna.
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Your welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh, this is just a lovely addition to your John and Shorty adventures, Crystie -- great job!! ;) And I'm certainly loving the fact that the 'painted props' get 'roped and dragged' .... just adds so much more levity to your write here!! ;) :) You should keep these in a collection to themselves -- great job and thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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LOL!! Oh, this is just a lovely addition to your John and Shorty adventures, Crystie -- great job!! ;) And I'm certainly loving the fact that the 'painted props' get 'roped and dragged' .... just adds so much more levity to your write here!! ;) :) You should keep these in a collection to themselves -- great job and thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing and the collection idea.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Chrystie, yes , I like this script, and I think it tells a great story. Now, I'm Danish, but the Scandinavian names are almost the same in the three countries. I think I would have stayed with Sven as it is also how it would be pronounced both in English and Swedish. I liked your story. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Hi Chrystie, yes , I like this script, and I think it tells a great story. Now, I'm Danish, but the Scandinavian names are almost the same in the three countries. I think I would have stayed with Sven as it is also how it would be pronounced both in English and Swedish. I liked your story. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Yes, I saw they were interchangeable. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a fun story to read, the characters are rich and colorful, and the setting is well explained. The Swedish character is delightful. The obsession with popcorn makes me smile. This is a very well written script, and I would love to see it develop, if it is going to. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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This is a fun story to read, the characters are rich and colorful, and the setting is well explained. The Swedish character is delightful. The obsession with popcorn makes me smile. This is a very well written script, and I would love to see it develop, if it is going to. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing. I am doing some little short scripts with these characters as a sort of prequel series to a longer script I wrote back in 2006 as a full-fledged musical melodrama/comedy. The long one is set in northern Utah and ends up with the characters finding someone to marry. I am trying to decide if the longer script can be posted here scene by scene without the music or not.
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I don?t see why not, but I can?t say I know a lot about those things.
Comment from AvL
Hey, I would pay $6.91 to see CC999's western. How did John Ford and Sam Peckinpah manage to miss this script? One groan: "UDDER business?" That pun is so bad that at first, I thought that maybe CC had stolen it from me! Also, the Swedish-American Anti-Defamation League will probably sue our author for her rendition of Swedish-accented English: Uff da! Anyway, five horseshoes for a real hoot of a screenplay. Yeehaw!
AvL
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Hey, I would pay $6.91 to see CC999's western. How did John Ford and Sam Peckinpah manage to miss this script? One groan: "UDDER business?" That pun is so bad that at first, I thought that maybe CC had stolen it from me! Also, the Swedish-American Anti-Defamation League will probably sue our author for her rendition of Swedish-accented English: Uff da! Anyway, five horseshoes for a real hoot of a screenplay. Yeehaw!
AvL
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I have a lot of fun with puns. I have other western scripts sitting around but am not sure what to do with them yet.
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You really know how to "milk" a bad joke! Later.
AvL
Comment from Cindy Warren
I wonder if Shorty will get his popcorn with butter. Will he want it when he discovers where butter comes from? And is he smart enough to milk a cow? Can John and Sven explain it to him? LOL
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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I wonder if Shorty will get his popcorn with butter. Will he want it when he discovers where butter comes from? And is he smart enough to milk a cow? Can John and Sven explain it to him? LOL
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing. There's the comic relief going full blast here :) City slickers, ha. (Although I have never milked a cow, either.)
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very cute script offering readers a sense of humor and several delightful plays on words. Love the 'Pilgrim' reference, as well. It feels like you are very familiar with the Swedish heritage.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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This is a very cute script offering readers a sense of humor and several delightful plays on words. Love the 'Pilgrim' reference, as well. It feels like you are very familiar with the Swedish heritage.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Well....research paid off then. I have one Swedish woven straw ornament on the Christmas tree, a jokebook with Swedish jokes in one section, and a Swedish great-great-grandmother who is deceased. The Internet helped, too. Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from w.j.debi
This is enjoyable to read and I bet it would be even more fun to perform or watch it. Your characters are humorous and your play on words is enchanting.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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This is enjoyable to read and I bet it would be even more fun to perform or watch it. Your characters are humorous and your play on words is enchanting.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you bunches for your super nice review!
