Petals Of Blood
Regret through estrangement.9 total reviews
Comment from LeannaP
I liked this poem.
You write well.
Your poem evokes pleasure and this solid theme of nature.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Much luck to your writings
Leanna
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I liked this poem.
You write well.
Your poem evokes pleasure and this solid theme of nature.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Much luck to your writings
Leanna
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem regret is always the cause of something good we did not do when we had the chance but let it slip by. A terrible emotion that is always too late to make a difference.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem regret is always the cause of something good we did not do when we had the chance but let it slip by. A terrible emotion that is always too late to make a difference.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Emotions writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the grief felt at the loss of a loved one.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Emotions writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the grief felt at the loss of a loved one.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Bill Pinder
You do a great job expressing the sadness and regret felt due to estrangement. I like the personification of the wind and the petals representing blood. Good luck in the contest.
Bill
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You do a great job expressing the sadness and regret felt due to estrangement. I like the personification of the wind and the petals representing blood. Good luck in the contest.
Bill
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from wanderlost
This is an incredible poem. The imagery you evoke is just heartrendingly beautiful.
The grave wears winter white./The rain leaves droplets of tears.
My flowers spread petals of blood,/thicker than water, for you, my daughter
You have a remarkable voice, and can spark emotions in the reader in a way that most authors here cannot. Excellent work!
~W
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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This is an incredible poem. The imagery you evoke is just heartrendingly beautiful.
The grave wears winter white./The rain leaves droplets of tears.
My flowers spread petals of blood,/thicker than water, for you, my daughter
You have a remarkable voice, and can spark emotions in the reader in a way that most authors here cannot. Excellent work!
~W
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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You have made my day. What a wonderful review. I think in poetry some topics touch the heart in the poet and the reader for an emotional combination.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Emotions aren't always easy to write about, but it could be very cathartic. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Emotions aren't always easy to write about, but it could be very cathartic. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is an especially poignant poem. It conveys emotion well, and it is befitting of the contest prompt {thumbs up}.
As an aside, some time ago, I was reading the memoirs of a nurse who cared for the terminally ill. She said that regret was the sentiment most often expressed by the patients.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
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This is an especially poignant poem. It conveys emotion well, and it is befitting of the contest prompt {thumbs up}.
As an aside, some time ago, I was reading the memoirs of a nurse who cared for the terminally ill. She said that regret was the sentiment most often expressed by the patients.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from QC Poet
What a Truely heartfelt reinterpretation of The feelings mentioned in your attached notes. The lamenting and wondering really struck me and one can feel it's genuineness.
My condolences and God's Healing Comfort to you.
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What a Truely heartfelt reinterpretation of The feelings mentioned in your attached notes. The lamenting and wondering really struck me and one can feel it's genuineness.
My condolences and God's Healing Comfort to you.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from jenintorre
This is such a poignant poem. The situation with your mother is so very sad. My heart goes out to you. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
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This is such a poignant poem. The situation with your mother is so very sad. My heart goes out to you. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
