Happiness
Emotion Poem10 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Raul1, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Hello Raul1, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Ogden
Your words pay homage to your chosen emotion, although my favorite element of your presentation is above them.
The illustration is a perfect depiction of happiness.
:o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Your words pay homage to your chosen emotion, although my favorite element of your presentation is above them.
The illustration is a perfect depiction of happiness.
:o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written emotions poem. Happiness is an easy emotion that any one can achieve without much effort. The healing power of any illnesses can be cured when we feel happy despite the body's condition.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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A very well-written emotions poem. Happiness is an easy emotion that any one can achieve without much effort. The healing power of any illnesses can be cured when we feel happy despite the body's condition.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is appealing and delightful, vividly descriptive of those cheerful, enjoyable scenes we need to keep our lives on an even keel.
They are a type of "cure."
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Your poem is appealing and delightful, vividly descriptive of those cheerful, enjoyable scenes we need to keep our lives on an even keel.
They are a type of "cure."
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
A well-crafted, well-thought out poem about the cures being happy can bring and science tells of its truth. Something to aspire to and your poem helps us to get going on this positive, but fleeting emotion.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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A well-crafted, well-thought out poem about the cures being happy can bring and science tells of its truth. Something to aspire to and your poem helps us to get going on this positive, but fleeting emotion.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Therese Caron
Great entry for the emotions contest. Everyone likes to read about happiness. Your words are fun and happy and no one can beat that yellow happy smiling face that came out so many years ago. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Great entry for the emotions contest. Everyone likes to read about happiness. Your words are fun and happy and no one can beat that yellow happy smiling face that came out so many years ago. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Alex Rosel
Oh, I do like this poem. It's simple and punchy, appropriately indicative of happiness {thumbs up}. And this image just adds to the fun.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Oh, I do like this poem. It's simple and punchy, appropriately indicative of happiness {thumbs up}. And this image just adds to the fun.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from LeannaP
Think of your happiness as a symbol of cure...
My favorite line. I thought that this was a great submission for the contest.
You followed the guidelines.
Nicely written work and background color!
Leanna
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Think of your happiness as a symbol of cure...
My favorite line. I thought that this was a great submission for the contest.
You followed the guidelines.
Nicely written work and background color!
Leanna
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks! Thank you for the compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Emotions writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the healing power of happiness.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Emotions writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the healing power of happiness.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A unique offering for the contest that describes the actions of those that are 'happy' and encourages us to think of our own happiness first... There seems to be no rhythm to your stanzas/between them although there is an end rhyme to most... Good luck in the contest! :)
out of happy --> lots of happy [????]
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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A unique offering for the contest that describes the actions of those that are 'happy' and encourages us to think of our own happiness first... There seems to be no rhythm to your stanzas/between them although there is an end rhyme to most... Good luck in the contest! :)
out of happy --> lots of happy [????]
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I fixed the mistake. You can check it out again. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
