Three Dozen Gifts
Christmas poetry contest entry.19 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written Christmas poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I agree with that in time we do change our ways and ideas a lot about the holidays. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Patricia, This is a very well written Christmas poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I agree with that in time we do change our ways and ideas a lot about the holidays. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Comment from judiverse
A wonderful presentation and excellent Christmas Poetry contest entry. You show the change from the child who loves seeing presents under the tree to the mother and grandmother who realizes that her family is the true gift. In the second line, you don't need the comma after gifts. You could avoid "Now" in your next to last line, as it's a repeat, or you might use a word like "Precious" to replace it. Best of luck. judi
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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A wonderful presentation and excellent Christmas Poetry contest entry. You show the change from the child who loves seeing presents under the tree to the mother and grandmother who realizes that her family is the true gift. In the second line, you don't need the comma after gifts. You could avoid "Now" in your next to last line, as it's a repeat, or you might use a word like "Precious" to replace it. Best of luck. judi
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Janetsue
This presents a significant message in a very beautiful way. Friends and family are precious gifts to be cherished all lifelong. I have been such a wanderer throughout the years that it's just recently that I am beginning to fully realize the impact of putting down roots surrounded by the love and kindness of others. This is a lovely posting, my friend!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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This presents a significant message in a very beautiful way. Friends and family are precious gifts to be cherished all lifelong. I have been such a wanderer throughout the years that it's just recently that I am beginning to fully realize the impact of putting down roots surrounded by the love and kindness of others. This is a lovely posting, my friend!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Comment from Mistydawn
You're so right. Christmas isn't about the gifts or the fancy decorations. It's about who we spend the holiday with. Your poem is very well-written, interesting,
very relatable. A great piece of wisdom. Your artwork is perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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You're so right. Christmas isn't about the gifts or the fancy decorations. It's about who we spend the holiday with. Your poem is very well-written, interesting,
very relatable. A great piece of wisdom. Your artwork is perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
This is a happy, sentimental but not maudlin, remembrance of Christmases past and how it is now, your still having gifts, your family. Love this tender expression. 'Tis a very good entry for the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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This is a happy, sentimental but not maudlin, remembrance of Christmases past and how it is now, your still having gifts, your family. Love this tender expression. 'Tis a very good entry for the contest!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem gently points out that the best things in life are not things, especially when it comes to Christmas time. It seems that presents mean one thing, and people close to the heart mean another thing, and hopefully more as one matures. Nice entry!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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This poem gently points out that the best things in life are not things, especially when it comes to Christmas time. It seems that presents mean one thing, and people close to the heart mean another thing, and hopefully more as one matures. Nice entry!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Patricia. Yes, I agree with you. The meaning of a gift under the tree changes as we age. Our gifts are most appreciated with time spent with family and being included in the celebration with them. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Hi Patricia. Yes, I agree with you. The meaning of a gift under the tree changes as we age. Our gifts are most appreciated with time spent with family and being included in the celebration with them. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Patricia. You have written a good verse and I did receive your message about complying with the format. I believe you could rework this verse, because the toughest part are the three syllable lines. The format can be a little difficult because it's pretty restrictive but you could just redo what you already have. Thank you for giving the Trido style a try. Robert
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Hello Patricia. You have written a good verse and I did receive your message about complying with the format. I believe you could rework this verse, because the toughest part are the three syllable lines. The format can be a little difficult because it's pretty restrictive but you could just redo what you already have. Thank you for giving the Trido style a try. Robert
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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You're welcome
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your theme about family being the most important gift. Thank you for using the Trido form to convey your message with its rhymes. Smiles and best wishes in the Christmas Poetry contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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I admired your theme about family being the most important gift. Thank you for using the Trido form to convey your message with its rhymes. Smiles and best wishes in the Christmas Poetry contest- Joan
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Comment from Therese Caron
This is a beautiful poem, and a true commentary on what happens as we grow and age. The best part of Christmas now is seeing everyone, and giving gifts to the little ones. My children are grown so that magic is gone. I still love the religious part of Christmas very much, and I like to see so much of the selfless giving I see in my town. But the best part is being with family and just laughing and talking. Great poem, wonderful words. Thank you for sharing this.
Terry C.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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This is a beautiful poem, and a true commentary on what happens as we grow and age. The best part of Christmas now is seeing everyone, and giving gifts to the little ones. My children are grown so that magic is gone. I still love the religious part of Christmas very much, and I like to see so much of the selfless giving I see in my town. But the best part is being with family and just laughing and talking. Great poem, wonderful words. Thank you for sharing this.
Terry C.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you Terry, for the lovely review.
