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Comment from Bill Pinder
Interesting idea expressed in this 2-line poem. What does the woman represent? I have never seen an image similar to that. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Bill
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Interesting idea expressed in this 2-line poem. What does the woman represent? I have never seen an image similar to that. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Bill
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Your end rhymes here are good, but you are missing two other important elements of the contest: each line must be six syllables and there also needs to be an internal rhyme for each line IN ADDITION TO the end rhyme. I would be happy to re-review once you update... :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Your end rhymes here are good, but you are missing two other important elements of the contest: each line must be six syllables and there also needs to be an internal rhyme for each line IN ADDITION TO the end rhyme. I would be happy to re-review once you update... :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks
