Hard to Bear
Free verse8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Unwrapping the love that is within us is the key to peace and serenity in our lives, that's so true. But I think it also takes maturity for most of us to realise that, I know it did with me.
Nice free verse Trisha, your thoughts and emotions flow, that why I love free verse.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Unwrapping the love that is within us is the key to peace and serenity in our lives, that's so true. But I think it also takes maturity for most of us to realise that, I know it did with me.
Nice free verse Trisha, your thoughts and emotions flow, that why I love free verse.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews, for your compliments
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LeannaP
For a poem that doesnt rhyme, this does fairly well in my eyes.
You write well. I love the picture of the teddy bear.
It reminds me of curdoroy.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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For a poem that doesnt rhyme, this does fairly well in my eyes.
You write well. I love the picture of the teddy bear.
It reminds me of curdoroy.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned Free Verse. The content is poignant and expresses the lingering scares of physical and emotional abuse in a candid, yet compassionate manner. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned Free Verse. The content is poignant and expresses the lingering scares of physical and emotional abuse in a candid, yet compassionate manner. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the power of the Holy Spirit that we each must discover ourselves and unwrap the precious gift from God.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem about the power of the Holy Spirit that we each must discover ourselves and unwrap the precious gift from God.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from QC Poet
Very true, I can't say I've ever Loved myself as flawed as I have been, but thank goodness for my wife showing me how to Love despite my old destructive behaviors. Blessings and Thank you for Sharing your Gifts this free verse poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Very true, I can't say I've ever Loved myself as flawed as I have been, but thank goodness for my wife showing me how to Love despite my old destructive behaviors. Blessings and Thank you for Sharing your Gifts this free verse poem.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest)(The baggage that we carry must be put aside if one is to ever be free to live and love.00Like the damaged bear all can be corrected with just a little stuffing, needle, thread and love. May damage-free love be yours.
RikkiXX
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Good luck in the contest)(The baggage that we carry must be put aside if one is to ever be free to live and love.00Like the damaged bear all can be corrected with just a little stuffing, needle, thread and love. May damage-free love be yours.
RikkiXX
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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It?s hard for victims of childhood or any abuse to believe they are lovable, thanks Rikki
Hugs, Trisha
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You are lovable.
Rikki
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I finally learned that, thanks so much
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I am glad.
Rikki
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hi Trisha -- the beginning (down to the last few lines, there) is a wonderful free verse offering for the contest.... the last few lines are quite confounding to me as they seem to be the copied lines from another of your offerings....? ? ? Think you might want to pop back in and eliminate them... thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Hi Trisha -- the beginning (down to the last few lines, there) is a wonderful free verse offering for the contest.... the last few lines are quite confounding to me as they seem to be the copied lines from another of your offerings....? ? ? Think you might want to pop back in and eliminate them... thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I don?t have a clue which lines to which you refer🔭I have no recollection of duplicity, thanks
Hugs, Trisha
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Not 'duplicity' Trisha... Here is an exact cut/paste of the last FOUR lines of your poem:
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Not cut and pasted! don?t know how that got there! I was worried you were saying I?d plagiarized myself LOL
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No!! Never, Trisha!! It just looked so odd there and I KNEW it wasn't part of your post!! ;) :) LOL! LOL! Take care over there, Beautiful Lady!! ;) :) Yvette
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Not 'duplicity' Trisha... Here is an exact cut/paste of the last FOUR lines of your poem:
I KNEW it wasn't part of your
Post!
Which is it - you?d messing wige ma mind lady!
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They're gone now... glad to see you deleted them.... ;):) :) :)
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Thank you ma?m :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse Poetry contest.
Your verse tells of freeing the spirit of love.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse Poetry contest.
Your verse tells of freeing the spirit of love.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks Sharon for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
