Non Restless Eye Movement
As important as breathing and eating2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Non Restless Eye Movement, has the required lines and formatting and helps us not to worry about the napping Nelly here.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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This four-line poem, Non Restless Eye Movement, has the required lines and formatting and helps us not to worry about the napping Nelly here.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your interesting comment about napping Nelly. I have just read an article that suggests too much napping is detrimental to Nelly?s health!
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Perhaps too much short cat-napping and not enough restful and restorative sleep.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful offering for this contest! You've taken the four-liner and turned it into a flowing form of the Teacup! ;) :) Well done!! ;) :) Thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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What a wonderful offering for this contest! You've taken the four-liner and turned it into a flowing form of the Teacup! ;) :) Well done!! ;) :) Thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your great, encouraging review.
