Hopeful Merry Christmas
Christmas Belief through the eyes of a child5 total reviews
Comment from Phoenix Rising
A lovely photo to frame your tender poem.
This time of the year we especially are aware of the need for creating hope and joy. Thank you for sharing this inspiring post.
Phoenix Rising
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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A lovely photo to frame your tender poem.
This time of the year we especially are aware of the need for creating hope and joy. Thank you for sharing this inspiring post.
Phoenix Rising
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Blessings to you and yours this Christmas and through the New Year.
Comment from Alchera
Hope is the only thing which is still going to remain as time goes by and most of the religious festivity are becoming step by step fewer and fewer. Great work throughout its perfect versification structure. Blessings Tony
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Hope is the only thing which is still going to remain as time goes by and most of the religious festivity are becoming step by step fewer and fewer. Great work throughout its perfect versification structure. Blessings Tony
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you Tony. I so appreciate your review and encouragement.
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You are always blessed. Have a nice day! Tony
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Thank you.
Comment from country ranch writer
I believe Christmas is for kids , and it is so sad so many go without at Christmas time. In a lot of schools they have programs to help the needy.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I believe Christmas is for kids , and it is so sad so many go without at Christmas time. In a lot of schools they have programs to help the needy.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Yes it is. Thank God a lot of schools and charities help the needy. No child should go without Christmas time.
Thanks for reviewing.
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I agree!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Four Line Poem contest.
Your verse combines faith, hope and Christmas joy.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Four Line Poem contest.
Your verse combines faith, hope and Christmas joy.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Kind regards.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A unique offering for the contest that seems to desire to deliver the message of hope found in giving to others and the joy such giving can give... I would only suggest, perhaps, the use of a different third line as it does not fit the 'mood' or 'aura' you've painted with the other three lines... 'tis but a suggestion. :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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A unique offering for the contest that seems to desire to deliver the message of hope found in giving to others and the joy such giving can give... I would only suggest, perhaps, the use of a different third line as it does not fit the 'mood' or 'aura' you've painted with the other three lines... 'tis but a suggestion. :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks for reviewing my poem and also for your suggestion. I will do this.
Kind regards.
