Life With A Carpet-layer
A 50-word relationship.20 total reviews
Comment from LeannaP
This was short , sweet , and fun to read.
I thought the idea of the girlfriend not wanting any rugrats was a unique and catchy line at the end.
You write well. It shows.
Good luck to you and all of your writings.
Happy holidays
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This was short , sweet , and fun to read.
I thought the idea of the girlfriend not wanting any rugrats was a unique and catchy line at the end.
You write well. It shows.
Good luck to you and all of your writings.
Happy holidays
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! Always best to practice safe sex with someone who lays for a living :). This is well penned and extremely entertaining. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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LOL! Always best to practice safe sex with someone who lays for a living :). This is well penned and extremely entertaining. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I only learned that word "shag" from that awful movie about a "spy." I liked that she didn't want "rugrats" and that he was beyond tacky but "tackless!"
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Lol. I only learned that word "shag" from that awful movie about a "spy." I liked that she didn't want "rugrats" and that he was beyond tacky but "tackless!"
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifty word dating cocounselling. The carpet layer will roll out the red carpet for everyone except for the ones close to him which he will not respect and walk all over them.
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A very well-written fifty word dating cocounselling. The carpet layer will roll out the red carpet for everyone except for the ones close to him which he will not respect and walk all over them.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there Lisa May
This is yet another very clever and entertaining little flash fiction. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope Matt manages to get laid. Best wishes. Jen.
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Hi there Lisa May
This is yet another very clever and entertaining little flash fiction. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope Matt manages to get laid. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Pam Norris
I really enjoyed this. You did very well incorporating so many carpet references whilst maintaining the story. I suspect you had fund doing it, it was fun to read.
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I really enjoyed this. You did very well incorporating so many carpet references whilst maintaining the story. I suspect you had fund doing it, it was fun to read.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Lisamay. You have certainly found an interesting guy this time. Since his line of work is probably a little mundane as he lays carpet in strips across the wooden floor, he might be great going out or at a party I guess you will find out soon. Keep us posted. Robert.
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Hello Lisamay. You have certainly found an interesting guy this time. Since his line of work is probably a little mundane as he lays carpet in strips across the wooden floor, he might be great going out or at a party I guess you will find out soon. Keep us posted. Robert.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
I shared this with my grandson and he loved it as he lays carpet with his grandfather for a living! He is going to show it to him tomorrow! You'll have them all "laying" around laughing!
xoxo
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I shared this with my grandson and he loved it as he lays carpet with his grandfather for a living! He is going to show it to him tomorrow! You'll have them all "laying" around laughing!
xoxo
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
She wasn't in the mood for a shag, and certainly didn't want any rugrats. LOL! This is a really good one. You are on a roll with this pun fun! Can you do an actor? :)
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She wasn't in the mood for a shag, and certainly didn't want any rugrats. LOL! This is a really good one. You are on a roll with this pun fun! Can you do an actor? :)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Love it. You are really on target with your clever word choices. They fit the profession of carpet layer well. Your piece is amusing and well thought out. Marilyn
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Love it. You are really on target with your clever word choices. They fit the profession of carpet layer well. Your piece is amusing and well thought out. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
