Life
Silly rhyming10 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
This two six "silly rhyming" versification stanzaic structural poem for this six line content has been perfectly written and beautifully narrated throughout its delicate teardrop storylined content which encloses a life's breath momentum". Great work. Blessings
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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This two six "silly rhyming" versification stanzaic structural poem for this six line content has been perfectly written and beautifully narrated throughout its delicate teardrop storylined content which encloses a life's breath momentum". Great work. Blessings
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your precious review.Thank you
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Happy Christmas Season from Italy
Tony
Comment from LeannaP
This should do well in the contest.
I found it to be quite intriguing.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
The picture you used to help describe your work also intrigued.
Much luck
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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This should do well in the contest.
I found it to be quite intriguing.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
The picture you used to help describe your work also intrigued.
Much luck
Comment Written 13-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words, I am a skeptic about the contest i never male it😊
Comment from Therese Caron
Very nice six line poem. Did you mean breathe the frost? It says breath the frost and of course that may mean something else. I love the picture you chose, as such a small part of life. Good luck in the six line poem contest!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Very nice six line poem. Did you mean breathe the frost? It says breath the frost and of course that may mean something else. I love the picture you chose, as such a small part of life. Good luck in the six line poem contest!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words and good luck with your writings
Comment from sunnilicious
Feed a craving and let it be... I think that was a rather nice poem. Short and to the point. Well thought out. Clearly written evoking nice visual imagery. Nicely done. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Feed a craving and let it be... I think that was a rather nice poem. Short and to the point. Well thought out. Clearly written evoking nice visual imagery. Nicely done. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-line poem with some rhyming about life and what makes it glows while they river flows into eternity and when we close our eyes we can breathe the frost we are longing to be lost.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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A very well-written six-line poem with some rhyming about life and what makes it glows while they river flows into eternity and when we close our eyes we can breathe the frost we are longing to be lost.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Sandra:) thank you so much for reviewing my silly poem
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, Life, has the required lines, which are three sets of rhyming couplets, and provides a way out of the vale of tears.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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This six-line poem, Life, has the required lines, which are three sets of rhyming couplets, and provides a way out of the vale of tears.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely review
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your rhyming for this short writing prompt is spot on. Only wish you had contrived one for middle two lines (-;
'River flows into eternity' is an excellent image. Do like 'breath the frost' too.
IMHO, since you did use punctuation, I am not a fan of your capitalization for some lines.
Best wishes going forward.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Your rhyming for this short writing prompt is spot on. Only wish you had contrived one for middle two lines (-;
'River flows into eternity' is an excellent image. Do like 'breath the frost' too.
IMHO, since you did use punctuation, I am not a fan of your capitalization for some lines.
Best wishes going forward.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouragement
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Six Line Poem contest.
I like your "silly rhyming". It's uplifting.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Six Line Poem contest.
I like your "silly rhyming". It's uplifting.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouragement
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a pity you called your poem 'silly rhyming' because I thought your words had depth of meaning here and your words could very well be winning words. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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It is a pity you called your poem 'silly rhyming' because I thought your words had depth of meaning here and your words could very well be winning words. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouragement and for grasping the meaning in between the lines:)
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Actually, I don't see it as a silly poem, but a fun one. "Life glows
River flows Into eternity" is a fascinating first half of the poem. The last 3 are kinda scary what with breathing frost and then losing longing. I liked it very much.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Actually, I don't see it as a silly poem, but a fun one. "Life glows
River flows Into eternity" is a fascinating first half of the poem. The last 3 are kinda scary what with breathing frost and then losing longing. I liked it very much.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouragement and for grasping the meaning in between the lines:)
