December 7th, 1941
When war found a sleeping giant...10 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
The narrative storylined versification of this six lined poem gives the reader a limpid image through each verse of what effectively had happened at Pearl's Habor. Its structure is well fitted to the given 4/4/5/5/6/6 scheme writing prompt entry contest. Great work.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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The narrative storylined versification of this six lined poem gives the reader a limpid image through each verse of what effectively had happened at Pearl's Habor. Its structure is well fitted to the given 4/4/5/5/6/6 scheme writing prompt entry contest. Great work.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thanx so much for checking in on this one, Tony -- it was a quick little contest entry after a long day at school! ;) Keep on smiling over there! ;) Yvette
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I always select what is necessary for your sake and where you need more, my dear friend of mine. I have excluded all my works on Fanstory because I have edited Alcheringa, so you can give a glance to the whole book if you like. I am still translating the Italian edition which is on the site too but part of it is in Italian. Cheers with a glass of Aglianico which is local very good wine. Cheers.Blessings Tony
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very good poem to remember the bombing of Pearl Harbor by the Japanese and brought us into WWII. Good words within a short piece. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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This is a very good poem to remember the bombing of Pearl Harbor by the Japanese and brought us into WWII. Good words within a short piece. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn, for your review on this one, ma'am -- much appreciated (as always!).. ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and the powerful message conveyed in it. We should never forget moments in history like this. A price was paid for what we freely enjoy today. Thank for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I like this and the powerful message conveyed in it. We should never forget moments in history like this. A price was paid for what we freely enjoy today. Thank for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you. ;-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, December 7, 1941, has the required lines, with an AABBCC rhyme scheme, and brings the readers back to the day that will live in infamy.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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This six-line poem, December 7, 1941, has the required lines, with an AABBCC rhyme scheme, and brings the readers back to the day that will live in infamy.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you. ;-)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem even if is bringing back sad memories. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem even if is bringing back sad memories. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A tragic point in American history that brought the nation into the World War that they tried their best to keep out of. We have a lot to thank the Americans for as they supported Britain when they joined forces with us. A pivotal moment in history, a tragic and dastardly attack on a peaceful nation that changed everything. I enjoyed your words here. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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A tragic point in American history that brought the nation into the World War that they tried their best to keep out of. We have a lot to thank the Americans for as they supported Britain when they joined forces with us. A pivotal moment in history, a tragic and dastardly attack on a peaceful nation that changed everything. I enjoyed your words here. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dancemom
This is an excellent entry for the six line poem contest. The poem has a really nice flow and rhyme, but it also tells a story about a historical event. Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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This is an excellent entry for the six line poem contest. The poem has a really nice flow and rhyme, but it also tells a story about a historical event. Great job!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Powerful and compelling read. Good art choice. Makes me feel the terror you talk about in the well-crafted 6 lines! It is a compact expression of that horrible attack.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Powerful and compelling read. Good art choice. Makes me feel the terror you talk about in the well-crafted 6 lines! It is a compact expression of that horrible attack.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Lovely and powerful presentation. I like your voice here. It projects a feel of passion and respect to this historical, tragic event in a truthful way. Well done
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Lovely and powerful presentation. I like your voice here. It projects a feel of passion and respect to this historical, tragic event in a truthful way. Well done
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-line poem about the historic event that took place on 7' December at Pearl Harbor a horrific event that survivors will never forget in their life.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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A very well-written six-line poem about the historic event that took place on 7' December at Pearl Harbor a horrific event that survivors will never forget in their life.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
