Self-Talk
Six Line Poem12 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
First of all congrats, this is an amazing entry very philosophical that let's you wonder "truth echos within the hollows of the heart." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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First of all congrats, this is an amazing entry very philosophical that let's you wonder "truth echos within the hollows of the heart." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the kind support and feedback. I simply penned what I have found to be true in my life - it's important to know which voice is talking as darkness can be so beguiling :).
Comment from Alchera
The beautiful comparison between "truth" and "lies" has been amazingly demonstrated and described throughout the perfect semantic choice of the words to establish the two different states of mind enclosed within its wonderful narrative storylined content. Great Work. Thanks for sharing.
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The beautiful comparison between "truth" and "lies" has been amazingly demonstrated and described throughout the perfect semantic choice of the words to establish the two different states of mind enclosed within its wonderful narrative storylined content. Great Work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is a philosophical look and truth and lies and their effect
on the heart and phyche.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
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This poem is a philosophical look and truth and lies and their effect
on the heart and phyche.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've said quite a bit here and I like the message of this. If we can get rid of that stinking thinking, we could get a bit further. Thanks for sharing this well written and thought provoking work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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You've said quite a bit here and I like the message of this. If we can get rid of that stinking thinking, we could get a bit further. Thanks for sharing this well written and thought provoking work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, Self-Talk, has the required lines, which are three sets of rhyming couplets, and explains the existence and location of truth and lies.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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This six-line poem, Self-Talk, has the required lines, which are three sets of rhyming couplets, and explains the existence and location of truth and lies.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-line poem about self-talk and feel search into our souls can lift us from darkened depths of doubt to light where we can see the good in everything around us.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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A very well-written six-line poem about self-talk and feel search into our souls can lift us from darkened depths of doubt to light where we can see the good in everything around us.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from QC Poet
I like the message contained within this submission. Had problems with my tablet but I'm sure this message will conform to the contest line requirements. It reads as eleven on my cell screen.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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I like the message contained within this submission. Had problems with my tablet but I'm sure this message will conform to the contest line requirements. It reads as eleven on my cell screen.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you. It is only six lines on the site. I used 20 point font and larger fonts will wrap on a tablet because of its much smaller display area.
Comment from lauralumummu
An intriguing little poem, I like the black and white theme. The contrast goes well with your words. The dark shadows of the mind a captivating line. All the best, Laura
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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An intriguing little poem, I like the black and white theme. The contrast goes well with your words. The dark shadows of the mind a captivating line. All the best, Laura
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, words strongly spoken, image to match, creative and interesting at the same time, creative thinking, color combination
on image and poem all blends in good, Poem flows.
Well done and good luck!
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Good read, words strongly spoken, image to match, creative and interesting at the same time, creative thinking, color combination
on image and poem all blends in good, Poem flows.
Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Six Line Poem contest.
Your short verse tells of the difference between truth and lies.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Six Line Poem contest.
Your short verse tells of the difference between truth and lies.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
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Thank you.
