Moments
It's a short trip2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-NIce image
and presentation.
-I like the style
of your poem, and
the descriptions you use.
-I like how you connect
a couple of the lines, and
then comment on them.
-My favorite image is
"an invitation to the rolling wheel."
-I also like the line about choices.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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-NIce image
and presentation.
-I like the style
of your poem, and
the descriptions you use.
-I like how you connect
a couple of the lines, and
then comment on them.
-My favorite image is
"an invitation to the rolling wheel."
-I also like the line about choices.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks for your kind review
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You are welcome.
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting angle here in this six- line poem on the whole idea of Time in our daily lives and the inevitable impact of its passing and such a nice visual
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Yes an interesting angle here in this six- line poem on the whole idea of Time in our daily lives and the inevitable impact of its passing and such a nice visual
Comment Written 10-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Thanks for the review
