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A Gift of Coins

Obscure Word used around Holiday Present-Silver

40 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- and it's actually just one word -- you definitely 'schooled me' on this one, sir! Such a wonderful offering of obscurity -- thanx so very much for joining in the holiday fun with us! ;) :) Merry Christmas from my corner of the world to yours! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
    Yvette, thank you I am pleased you enjoyed this. May you and your loved ones be blessed many times throughout this Christmas period. Jim
Comment from wanderlost
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This is quite amusing. A nice old fashioned word that perfectly defines a very real modern action: Giving money instead of a gift. Maybe a modern update should be present-plastic?

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
    Maybe that would be more appropriate for the times LOL
Comment from nomi338
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Congratulations. You got me twice, I was not aware of Present-Silver, nor was I familiar with the word Salver. Now I know at least two terms that I was ignorant of before hand. Fanstory not only entertains its members with wonderful poetry, it also educates us with information that heretofore may not have been known to some of us.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
    Nomi, I find the same true nearly every day. A great reason to be active on FS.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
    The dear friend, thank you so much. May you and your loved ones have a most Joyful Christmas!
Comment from Sugarray77
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I enjoyed learning about the term present-silver. It was new to me, but I have been the recipient of this type of gift many times... I am glad you defined it for us in your stellar verse. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2019
    Melissa, thank you, it is nice to have the pocket money.
Comment from Janetsue
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This is certainly an eye-catching posting.

Silver and/or gold are always terrific gifts for anyone to receive. (I'd even settle for past-silver if present-silver happened to not be readily available!) LOL

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Spangle you and me both... smiling back!
Comment from bhogg
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I would think that this fits all of the requirements of the contest. Though I've gotten some change for gifts from time to time, never heard the word present-silver. Entertained and educated...

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you 🙏
Comment from Toni Scales
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Such a worthy contest entry. Excellent writing and perfectly chosen and placed diction. I love the image as well; it suits the poem perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing this.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Toni, thank you I am honored by your six-star review.
Comment from Hitcher
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That is definitely not a word I have come across present-silver though I could actually use it this month for my 17 year old daughter would love some present-silver instead of presents on Christmas day. My 15 year old is still all about the presents though : ))
Well done and thank you for the new word... Good luck!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you! I?ve been gifting Barnes and Noble gift cards for a time now, myself.
Comment from LeannaP
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Hi There,
I must say this was a difficult contest to enter, but your submission definitely contends.
I like the "present-silver " line.
You should do well in the contest with this entry!
Look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much!