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Comment from
Alex Rosel
I enjoyed this entry for the Tree-Hugger contest. It throws a different perspective from others that I've read {thumbs up}.
Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
Thank you for the thumbs up ..maybe paws up too...if only the lion could vote (biggrin)..how I miss the emojis.
I did try to tackle this contest from a fresh angle...and I did make two lines rhyme ... (smile).
reply by Alex Rosel on 09-Dec-2019
"if only the lion could vote" -- Ha,ha!
Comment from
Dancemom
This is a good entry for the 575 contest. You have successfully used the correct syllable count. Very well written. I like your choice of a lion. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
I wanted to find a take not so obvious and I though, a lion forked between two large branches in the shade , did that.
Thank you for reviewing my poem!
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