Sun-kissed !
Tree Hugger 5-7-52 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Excellent personification and a unique approach to the contest. Witty and well presented too! This should do well in the voting booth due to its originality and cleverness.
Minor suggestions:
*remove space preceding the ! mark.
Alternate punctuation options:
ugh! no human hugs
for ancient oaks like me--would
rather be sun-kissed
(I think the period is not needed and a dash would give more dramatic pause).
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Excellent personification and a unique approach to the contest. Witty and well presented too! This should do well in the voting booth due to its originality and cleverness.
Minor suggestions:
*remove space preceding the ! mark.
Alternate punctuation options:
ugh! no human hugs
for ancient oaks like me--would
rather be sun-kissed
(I think the period is not needed and a dash would give more dramatic pause).
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Thanks for reading and a most reflective review zanya
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:-)))
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
haha this is so creative I like the picture you chose too. Did you draw this yourself?Very original and this should be taken into consideration in the contest. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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haha this is so creative I like the picture you chose too. Did you draw this yourself?Very original and this should be taken into consideration in the contest. Best wishes!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Great review -thanks for those encouraging words zanya
