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Timber

Nature 5-7-5

2 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice images
and presentation.
-Notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic and
imagery and alliteration.
-I like how you personify
the wind and the old oak.
-It is a stately tree and
deserves to be seen and enjoyed.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
    Thank you.
reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Dec-2019
    You are welcome.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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Your poem about the axe felling the tree is a fitting partner to my upcoming story about an axe as the object of desire in a utopian society where trees are protected by law.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
    Thank you.