Naughty Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Phone Call"Caution a Collection of Mature Thoughts
10 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Wow! Well, Trisha. I've gotta give you a sixer for this one. Great job. Not just your run-of-the mill date night. Good dialogue to go with the pix for this post of the club. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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Wow! Well, Trisha. I've gotta give you a sixer for this one. Great job. Not just your run-of-the mill date night. Good dialogue to go with the pix for this post of the club. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
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BeesPeas is the one to please, LOL. Thanks Marylin, a great review and extra star is always welcome. I?m glad you enjoyed my version
Hugs, Trisha
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I went and took a cold shower. Whew! Great job, though, as you can tell from my sixer. Marilyn
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You?re WELCOME, LOL
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck with the entry. Due to age and medication arousal has been infrequent this came close. Being the devil I am the last line would have been.00
Voice Who is this?00 If she is wearing a crotchless thong she should just take them off for all the good they would do. Well done.
Rikki
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Good luck with the entry. Due to age and medication arousal has been infrequent this came close. Being the devil I am the last line would have been.00
Voice Who is this?00 If she is wearing a crotchless thong she should just take them off for all the good they would do. Well done.
Rikki
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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It?s part of the imagery . The voice is the husband?s but the girl?s voice is the wife?s . Rikki, thank you for the honor of six stars . I?m glad you ?almost? had a happy ending. Aging is mean! Hugs Trisha
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I have read several story's derived from this picture this was the best.
Rikki
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This s very different Trisha, and a great interpretation,
and even better finish. I think you had a bit of fun writing this one, LOL
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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This s very different Trisha, and a great interpretation,
and even better finish. I think you had a bit of fun writing this one, LOL
cheers
valda
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thanks valda, I was thinking outside the box. Yes, it was risking public opinion, but what the heck!!!! Thanks for reviewing positively
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
TRISHA! I AM SHOCKED LOL!! This meets the Club Challenge splendidly as you deliver a well penned and intriguing spin to this artwork. Most o us went romantic love on this one, but you went quite down and dirty :). Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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TRISHA! I AM SHOCKED LOL!! This meets the Club Challenge splendidly as you deliver a well penned and intriguing spin to this artwork. Most o us went romantic love on this one, but you went quite down and dirty :). Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Just trying to keep a little shock value in the mix! I?m glad it did its job. I appreciate your warm review. It?s not as down and dirty as I could have made it,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual and naughty write Trisha and you really got carried away here! Ha ha ha, but you socked it to us with the last line! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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This is a sensual and naughty write Trisha and you really got carried away here! Ha ha ha, but you socked it to us with the last line! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Me, over do it? Never! I?m glad you got some chuckles from this challenge, thanks for your nice review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bukcketlist
your Ekphrastic The Phone Call from Angela is very erotic calling here self, I'm the Black Widow Temptress!
who is?, well a reviewer will have to read what Angelas is wearing and has to offer.
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Hello Bukcketlist
your Ekphrastic The Phone Call from Angela is very erotic calling here self, I'm the Black Widow Temptress!
who is?, well a reviewer will have to read what Angelas is wearing and has to offer.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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The wife Is the temptress, she is role playing for her husband. Thanks for reviewing Gert,.hugs, Trisha
I hope the cold isn?t adding to your pain. I miss Vermont a lot, but my body cannot take the intense cold.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a fun story with a surprise ending.
Date night with hubby is clever.
The beautiful artwork is a good match.
Well written, well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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This is a fun story with a surprise ending.
Date night with hubby is clever.
The beautiful artwork is a good match.
Well written, well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Hi Sharon, thanks for your very kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I was reading the story, thinking, what have I gotten into? And then I read the punch line. Well done! I haven't answered that challenge yet. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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I was reading the story, thinking, what have I gotten into? And then I read the punch line. Well done! I haven't answered that challenge yet. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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He he, I?m glad I confused you at first! Thanks for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome, Trisha. ==Darlene
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh, yeah, that's one way to keep those 'home fires burning', my lady!! ;) :) Wonderful and original answer to the challenge this time, Trisha -- perfect 'punch line'!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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LOL!! Oh, yeah, that's one way to keep those 'home fires burning', my lady!! ;) :) Wonderful and original answer to the challenge this time, Trisha -- perfect 'punch line'!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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No problem, Yvette! I?m glad you found it titivating ha ha! Thanks, i appreciate your.complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! This was a fun piece. Of course, you've misdirected the reader, but that part of the fun. I couldn't guess where it was going, so your last line caught me unaware. It's well crafted {thumbs up}.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Ha, ha! This was a fun piece. Of course, you've misdirected the reader, but that part of the fun. I couldn't guess where it was going, so your last line caught me unaware. It's well crafted {thumbs up}.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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That was my mission! It is validating to have others ?get? it. Maybe this piece should have been called sex with a twist LOL. Thanks very much Alex for your positive review.
Hugs, Trisha
