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New Mercy

A Restoration Story

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Comment from June Sargent
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Very uplifting sentiments that capture in a few short lines the source of all comfort and hope. We do not have to carry the burden ourselves. When we allow Him to sustain us, peace envelopes us. Well said.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
    There's nobody like Jesus!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We can often be renewed in life and change out outlook and it gives us a whole new lease on life and every New Year I try and practice this, your words are much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
    Thanks Dolly!
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank goodness we have the Lord and his new, never failing mercies. A wonderful thing about being a Christian. A fine entry for the short form poetry contest, Brenda dear.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank you Sally!
Comment from Therese Caron
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This is a great contest entry! The words are simple and beautiful. You have done a lot with only a few syllables, and it works very well. The picture you chose to accompany the poem complements it beautifully. This is a wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your kind words. I pray someone will be encouraged. I'm still holding on.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
Your story of life beginning again is clear in your short verse.
Well done and I wish you well with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank You Sharon!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a lovely process the heart follows after a loss or a disappointment... your 5-7-5 does a wonderful job defining that for us - thank you for sharing! ;) Good luck ! ;)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank You!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 inspirational poem about every day's a start of a new page. Whatever we write today on that page will be wiped clean and we will start a new page again.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank you Sandra!
Comment from Mistydawn
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What beautiful artwork. It's perfect for your poem. You're so right, sometimes all we need is a little hope, encouragement that things will improve. Very nicely said.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thank You!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and true words, lovely imagery from the art work and great scriptures. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Thanks Teri!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, New Mercy, has the right set up and lets the readers know that there is no end to the grace and power of God.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2019
    Hallelujah! Thanks Bill!