There's No Tomorrow
Food for thought29 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
AAAWWW what a way to look at it and therefore today is always. Very nice imagination and I love the way you put it to rhyme. Gave me my daily smile. ..
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AAAWWW what a way to look at it and therefore today is always. Very nice imagination and I love the way you put it to rhyme. Gave me my daily smile. ..
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Barb, for your review and stars.
Comment from Hitcher
The endless game of tag, today relentlessly chasing tomorrow leaving us with the memories of yesterday : ) a clever little poem that is definitely food for thought, well done, I enjoyed it!
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The endless game of tag, today relentlessly chasing tomorrow leaving us with the memories of yesterday : ) a clever little poem that is definitely food for thought, well done, I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Hitcher for your comments and stars.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
The logic behind this poem is so true, letting the idea speak for it's self. I have written several poems on time slipping away and such. I enjoyed this. Willie. Your meter and rhyme is very well done. Nancy:)
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The logic behind this poem is so true, letting the idea speak for it's self. I have written several poems on time slipping away and such. I enjoyed this. Willie. Your meter and rhyme is very well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Nancy for your review and questions.
Comment from Susan Larson
How cleverly you wrote this into a poem. There's a local tavern with a sign that reads "free beer tomorrow." It gives me a laugh. Your poem gives me pause... and a chuckle. Very philosophically put!
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How cleverly you wrote this into a poem. There's a local tavern with a sign that reads "free beer tomorrow." It gives me a laugh. Your poem gives me pause... and a chuckle. Very philosophically put!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Susan, for your review and stars.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about chasing tomorrow but we seem not to catch up because we only have today. What we do today is more important than yesterday or tomorrow.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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A very well-written poem about chasing tomorrow but we seem not to catch up because we only have today. What we do today is more important than yesterday or tomorrow.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for your review and stars.
Comment from Ogden
How true! Undeniable! Clever and well-rhymed, and in a very short poem, yet!
I would be scrolling down to a sixer now, but, unfortunately, I have none left.
Sincerely,
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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How true! Undeniable! Clever and well-rhymed, and in a very short poem, yet!
I would be scrolling down to a sixer now, but, unfortunately, I have none left.
Sincerely,
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Don, for your review and stars.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
LOL! Your mind is working overtime. That is really a rare perspective that one would not come up with easily. So you did and I agree, there is no tomorrow there's just today. Good poem
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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LOL! Your mind is working overtime. That is really a rare perspective that one would not come up with easily. So you did and I agree, there is no tomorrow there's just today. Good poem
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Raffaelina, fr the nice review and stars.
Comment from Michele Harber
I love this poem. The logic behind it is brilliant, and you wrote it very simply and directly, letting the ideas speak for themselves. Your rhymes and near rhymes work nicely.
If you do want a picture, the image of days flying off a desk calendar would serve your purpose, as each day that flies away was a tomorrow, leaving you with, as you said, today. Such pictures are easily available online.
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I love this poem. The logic behind it is brilliant, and you wrote it very simply and directly, letting the ideas speak for themselves. Your rhymes and near rhymes work nicely.
If you do want a picture, the image of days flying off a desk calendar would serve your purpose, as each day that flies away was a tomorrow, leaving you with, as you said, today. Such pictures are easily available online.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Michele, for the review, suggestion and beautiful, shiny six stars.
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You're so welcome. Those stars were very well deserved.
Comment from Ben Colder
Well, nobody can dispute this poem. So true is our lives as we live day by day, tomorrow never comes. The wording is good , the message is right on. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Well, nobody can dispute this poem. So true is our lives as we live day by day, tomorrow never comes. The wording is good , the message is right on. Thanks for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Ben, for your review and stars.
